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Passion, Lust, Desires
Passion, Lust Desires
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When a person really desires something, all the universe conspires to help that person to realize his dream.
Paulo Coelho
Paulo Coelho
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Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
Hi, like the way you make 'passion' echo, in the listener achieves anatomical effects without using anatomical words. The video is visual Viagra!
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Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
26th May 2019 6:36am
Thank you my handsome King for taking the time to read and then comment. I love the comparison to the visual Viagra, totally priceless. Enjoy your Sunday church service and a great upcoming week
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This Sunday is a little more special, second anniversary of my move into my present home. Day I moved was the day after Ascension Day that year (2017).
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Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
26th May 2019 8:55pm
Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
25th May 2019 1:07pm
Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
26th May 2019 6:40am
Mmm.. one of my favorite characteristics, leaving a man speechless, and thank you handsome one for taking the time to comment and read, please enjoy the remainder of your day as it enfolds
Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
25th May 2019 3:48pm
Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
26th May 2019 6:42am
You are too kind with such uplifting words, thank you my love for taking the time to listen and adding an encouraging comment. Do enjoy your Sunday as well
Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
25th May 2019 10:42pm
This is so beautiful
it conveys
sex in a myriad ways
from cougar to living violent dagger
gal and guy entwined
then lesbian too
lovely video from lady you
passion is all that we want to live for
love follows and lust all argue
which came first
the egg or chicken
hardly matters
both are eaten
OK taken
Sadly enough two of my good poets here
one has banned me
the other swears
praises
again stands misunderstood
at times wearing
no desired hood
hope my comments would have test of time withstood...
Thank you for the inspiration
it conveys
sex in a myriad ways
from cougar to living violent dagger
gal and guy entwined
then lesbian too
lovely video from lady you
passion is all that we want to live for
love follows and lust all argue
which came first
the egg or chicken
hardly matters
both are eaten
OK taken
Sadly enough two of my good poets here
one has banned me
the other swears
praises
again stands misunderstood
at times wearing
no desired hood
hope my comments would have test of time withstood...
Thank you for the inspiration
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Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
26th May 2019 6:48am
What a beautiful poem as an encore in regards to my spoken word. You have rattled me again...and you know I would say, play those sweet melodic harmonies of passion… mmm just one more time, and much slower. Thank you for reading and commenting, as they say, the blessing of again, just make the ending that much sweeter. Enjoy your day my love
Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
25th May 2019 11:14pm
Beautifully orchestrated. "Passion" still subliminally echoing in the mind...sultry voice and some very suggestive imagery supporting this piece. Nicely done!
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Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
26th May 2019 6:53am
If you could see this plastered smile, you will be convinced, there lays in the abyss of my soul is the calling if passion, lust, and desires, hopefully when it spill forth, may you can be the recipient of its honey drippings to taste. Thank you for reading and then commenting. Have a great evening and early morning
Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
27th May 2019 5:51am
Creative indeed to provide a video to go along with your poem. I would had never thought of such, reasons why we are on different playing fields. Keep up the creativity.
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Re: Re. Passion, Lust, Desires
27th May 2019 5:40pm
Why thank you my handsome poet for taking the time to glance my over and add an uplifting comment. Enjoy your Memorial Day as well