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Pondering time
In my mind
all that ever existed
was the final seal
soft on my lips
it never came
eyes were greedy
promises were mundane
hearts were trodden
autumn came
even noon smiled its coldness
winter setting in the bones
the end now gently beckoning
the sun would set soon
once upon a whisper
hopes for love were real
now its just a crystal moon.
all that ever existed
was the final seal
soft on my lips
it never came
eyes were greedy
promises were mundane
hearts were trodden
autumn came
even noon smiled its coldness
winter setting in the bones
the end now gently beckoning
the sun would set soon
once upon a whisper
hopes for love were real
now its just a crystal moon.
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Re: Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 11:00pm
Thank you for reading dear Melia. Crystal moon kept on sounding in my mind...so I wrote it out to silence it. :)
Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 1:14pm
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23rd May 2019 11:01pm
Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 1:59pm
"Was the finale seal
Soft on my lips"
I read it, then closed my eyes and felt it.
Soft on my lips"
I read it, then closed my eyes and felt it.
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Re: Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 11:03pm
Snuggle buck:) now I will keep awake pondering that one. Thanks for reading. So kind.
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23rd May 2019 2:58pm
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23rd May 2019 11:04pm
Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 3:08pm
"hopes for love were real
now its just a crystal moon."
... such poetically powerful, sad, and melancholic words.
now its just a crystal moon."
... such poetically powerful, sad, and melancholic words.
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23rd May 2019 11:05pm
Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 3:49pm
O Grace, that is the stream of a tear.
Beautifully Written, with Your heart woven in the words.
We throw our wishes and aspirations out upon the winds, yet lucky if we capture one of them.
Fragile, wandering and searching is the journey in life...not always sweet, so when the good bits come, they stay with Us.
As Always Grace, Moving Ink
See You Soon!!!
Beautifully Written, with Your heart woven in the words.
We throw our wishes and aspirations out upon the winds, yet lucky if we capture one of them.
Fragile, wandering and searching is the journey in life...not always sweet, so when the good bits come, they stay with Us.
As Always Grace, Moving Ink
See You Soon!!!
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Re: Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 11:07pm
Hi Soul. Sometimes I just need to write it out of my head. I ponder most times on useless stuff gone with the wind. Thank you so much for reading... appreciated as always.:)
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25th Jun 2019 12:52pm
Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 5:58pm
Grace it is wonderful to hear from you. Your write holds a kind of resignation to the cycles of nature and time. It is very lovely in it's despondence and surrender. 💖🙏🏻
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Re: Re. Pondering time
23rd May 2019 11:09pm
Dear Daniel...thank you so much for reading me. Kind of you. Sometimes one have to let it out...writing is a good vent.
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25th May 2019 6:20am
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25th May 2019 11:08am
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20th Dec 2019 10:12am
Thanks for sharing. Such a familiar situation, how you captured it, how it spoke to me.
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