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S & S
Merging in sand & sweat
Synchronous glides amongst azure tides
Bodies collide against sonic sound
Harsh waves stifling their rhythmic cries
Desire entwined & extolled
Souls aligned beneath candlelit skies
Intoxicated by sea & sex
Liquid delirium in salted midnight thighs
Author's Note
Sand & sweat
Sea & sex
All under night sky...
......yet again!
*giggles*
Sea & sex
All under night sky...
......yet again!
*giggles*
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20th May 2019 4:41am
Damn, my sweet friend...you've given me the biggest smile! I've been working incredibly hard to capture some freaking rhythm!!🖤
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19th May 2019 9:58pm
beautiful Pandora so intensely passionate
and a real beauty of a write...
love Brenda 💕
and a real beauty of a write...
love Brenda 💕
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20th May 2019 4:42am
Thank you, my lovely. Pandy's back, I feel it. Yay to a happy family again!😋
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Anonymous
19th May 2019 10:36pm
You spilled perfectly thick and rich, in a direction that brings illation, gratification....Sexy...Yeah, like that!!!
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20th May 2019 4:45am
I'm pleased to know you like it like that, sweets. I need to head your way soo. I'm soooooo behind!😯
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Anonymous
20th May 2019 00:44am
Ohhh this is lovely...I can see, hear and sense the passion in this one...passion in all the elements combined...well done!! Short write but with a helluva bang!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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20th May 2019 4:49am
Thank you, my other lovely! You'll catch on quickly to my 3somes with the sea & moon.😋 I've gotta pour out something longer & in some form...I'm itching to. I have 2 inspirations to stoke my mind now. Yay. Big hugs!
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20th May 2019 1:23pm
Love the integration of all the senses with the sea, the sand, the moon, the intertwined bodies rhythmically playing with each other.
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22nd May 2019 3:42pm
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21st May 2019 11:57pm
Ah the memories of being on a beach towel in the sand dunes. Enjoyed how you interwove the sights, sounds and smells of a moon lit beach night.
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22nd May 2019 3:43pm
I'm ever so happy you enjoyed it..there's something about that sea & moon!
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9th Jun 2019 9:30pm
Thank you for being so gracious & giving me an add. I'm glad to see a new face in my world..I will check you out my next visit.;)
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17th Jun 2019 5:06am
Absolutely brilliant and hot ink PandoraUnleashed... you never fail to deliver :)
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17th Jun 2019 8:36am