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Just a word
Once goodbye ruled
lived in fear of a word
of losing you
Rapids of time
Swallowed life
But in the beast belly
Steel becomes bone, flesh, all
From the dark tyrant
I rise its conqueror
Released
lived in fear of a word
of losing you
Rapids of time
Swallowed life
But in the beast belly
Steel becomes bone, flesh, all
From the dark tyrant
I rise its conqueror
Released
Published 10th May 2019
Author's Note
rip...for now.
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28th May 2019 11:23am
The beginning got me real hard . I felt the same when a word could crush everything you have. But for me the worst is the unsure goodbye ...it really hurts when you see the light but still have to lose it.
It was short and intense, loved it but i would love to read a longer version :D Keep it up and head to the light, conqueror
It was short and intense, loved it but i would love to read a longer version :D Keep it up and head to the light, conqueror
