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Here we go again
Work in progress...
Something's wrong
Something's wrong
Don't question what I say
You know I'm always right
I will never go away
.....working on the end....
Something's wrong
Something's wrong
Don't question what I say
You know I'm always right
I will never go away
.....working on the end....
Published 3rd May 2019
| Edited 24th May 2019
Author's Note
This is a work in progress so be patient
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3rd May 2019 10:04am
I kinda like it how it is,
the piece with that ending could have many connotations,
and i enjoy that in a snappy poem,
the piece with that ending could have many connotations,
and i enjoy that in a snappy poem,
24th May 2019 2:56pm
