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So far Gone


 
So far gone
Gone too soon
What the fuck
Happened to you
Guess now no one
Will ever know the truth
 
Im just angry cause my son  
never even got to meet you
My brother
My hero  
 
Im so pissed you had to go
But I know that pain
It  comsumes you from the inside out
Insideous till the very end
 
But now at least you are free
Released from its grasp
But it still clutches me
 
Shit I never wanted to bury you  
Or push you away
I was scared  
Angry because you changed
Or was it just the chase
Cars, women, money,drugs
 
It doesn't matter now  
You're gone and could never be replaced  
I held your hand cold and heavy
Your soul was gone  
The vessel left empty
I just hope you forgive me and smile
I love you bro,
...I'm still gonna be angry awhile

Written by darlingxxdesolate (Desolate Noir)
Published | Edited 24th May 2019
Author's Note
Recently loss my brother still working kn this rough draft...working through the reality of it all.
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