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Craving
Today I crave you, like you were my last breathe...
Teasing and inviting you haunt my very being...
Your taste, so intoxicating, I breathe you into me deeply and the rush of your substance fills my body...
I bring you to my lips; draw you in between my breasts until my hunger is satisfied...
I am addicted... A helpless puppet...and you, my greatest hate or vilest love...
(feelings of an x-smoker)
BY:R Fuller 12/1/2011
Teasing and inviting you haunt my very being...
Your taste, so intoxicating, I breathe you into me deeply and the rush of your substance fills my body...
I bring you to my lips; draw you in between my breasts until my hunger is satisfied...
I am addicted... A helpless puppet...and you, my greatest hate or vilest love...
(feelings of an x-smoker)
BY:R Fuller 12/1/2011
Published 1st Dec 2011
| Edited 6th Dec 2011
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1st Dec 2011 3:10pm
1st Dec 2011 9:35pm
1st Dec 2011 6:12pm
Very succinct and now, if you'll excuse me, I gotta find my smokes...great read.
1st Dec 2011 9:36pm
Anonymous
10th Dec 2011 3:49am
I love the play on the words lol I did the same thing not long ago. Mine is called "Tasty"
10th Dec 2011 2:34pm
thank you, I will have to read your piece....I love writing this way... I have several others..."sweet" is also a twist I enjoyed doing lol...
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21st Mar 2014 8:56pm
Echo milkyway. (BTW, noticing how long ago you published, still on the wagon?)
22nd Mar 2014 4:05pm
