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Lightning
Thunder surely won't scare me
but lightning might just blow me away
I'm awash amid all this sensation
as the rains have come out to play
the darkness, it doesn't bother
insecurity always gets in the way
keeps me in check with the servitude
where only these treetops would sway
winds may be daunting and arduous
but harnessed, won't lead one astray
the tethers are made to be tightened
and the lightning might brighten your day
but lightning might just blow me away
I'm awash amid all this sensation
as the rains have come out to play
the darkness, it doesn't bother
insecurity always gets in the way
keeps me in check with the servitude
where only these treetops would sway
winds may be daunting and arduous
but harnessed, won't lead one astray
the tethers are made to be tightened
and the lightning might brighten your day
Published 29th Apr 2019
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29th Apr 2019 4:31pm
I am truly happy to be in this forum. I would like to improve on my write-ups by studying poems like this one. I love the delicacy of language
29th Apr 2019 4:45pm
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 5:08pm
Let there be rain...and beautiful thunderstorms! I felt the energy in this one. :-)
29th Apr 2019 5:11pm
It was powerful, I'm sure the flowers will be blooming when the sun comes back out.
Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 6:29pm
can`t have one
without the other,
particularly if you
want to play ...
*like*
29th Apr 2019 6:31pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
29th Apr 2019 6:42pm
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29th Apr 2019 6:48pm
29th Apr 2019 6:46pm
"and the lightning might brighten your day"
... like the different take on this last line of the poem.
... like the different take on this last line of the poem.
29th Apr 2019 6:49pm
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