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Forever Dreaming
Forever dreaming in my dreams
Of everything yet nothing new,
With visions showing dark extremes
Where flights of fantasies go to.
A comet stretched a million times
( Forever dreaming in my dreams ),
Seen leaving trails of stars behind;
I marvel, but I hear no screams.
Rewriting all my hopes & schemes,
On time continuum, I ride.
Forever dreaming in my dreams,
As parallel of worlds collide.
For me to take a quantum leap:
A quest for life and what it means,
I went a thousand light years deep,
Forever dreaming in my dreams.
NaPoGloPoWriMo 2019
Author's Note
• Day Twenty-nine of Thirty
• unique words: 64
• unique words: 64
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Re. Forever Dreaming
29th Apr 2019 8:29am
" I went a thousand light years deep, " <<<-------- what i wouldn't give to sleep this long!
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29th Apr 2019 11:15pm
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29th Apr 2019 11:18pm
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29th Apr 2019 11:27pm
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29th Apr 2019 11:33pm
now You will understand when You see Sky's most recent collabs with me, posted.
**returns embrace**
**returns embrace**
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29th Apr 2019 11:51pm
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 10:11am
Very soothing words...
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29th Apr 2019 11:20pm
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29th Apr 2019 12:26pm
The flow of this is very dreamlike, Jade. A mesmerizing write indeed.
Really enjoyed reading this!
Really enjoyed reading this!
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Thank you, dear Sage, that’s very special to me, how it took you there. x
Re. Forever Dreaming
29th Apr 2019 2:28pm
"I went a thousand light years deep,
Forever dreaming in my dreams."
... these two lines make a superb ending, and leaves the reader propelled into further investigation of their own dreams.
Forever dreaming in my dreams."
... these two lines make a superb ending, and leaves the reader propelled into further investigation of their own dreams.
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Re: Re. Forever Dreaming
29th Apr 2019 11:44pm
Thanks so much, Josh, I appreciate your feedback.
The thing that’s always amazed me in my years as a poet... is when a fellow poet graces me with how my words have affected them as the reader.
The thing that’s always amazed me in my years as a poet... is when a fellow poet graces me with how my words have affected them as the reader.
Re. Forever Dreaming
29th Apr 2019 10:56pm
I read this and it will doubtless inspire my dreams. Love your lines, jade. Ninja says hello!
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Re: Re. Forever Dreaming
29th Apr 2019 11:50pm
Thank you, my dear crowfly friend, it’s always so good to see you. I hope my words will help inspire your dreams, as Ninja sleeps curled up with you, protectively. x
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30th Apr 2019 3:36am
Re. Forever Dreaming
11th May 2019 6:44am
Dream & space always goes so well together. The mind is an universe after all. Beautiful write.
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11th May 2019 7:07am
Why thank you, Mahmudul, for your observation of the mind being a universe unto itself - a perfection of express - thank you for your embrace, my friend.
Re. Forever Dreaming
12th May 2019 3:21am
This is really uplifting, dreams are truly limitless, great entry showcasing your rhyming skills :)
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Oh my sweet sister, that’s so terribly kind of you, from such a feeling heart as yours. x :3