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Bare
The flaws are what make you shine
each touch a caress of hidden design
breaths drawn, fingers enthralled
with an attention to minor detail
I'd jump thru hoops for you
as i come across your scene
mountains of perseverance
where stamina finds the seam
no more rising early to an empty slate
the sea breeze washes off the stain
new life begins again
head to toe
each crease and crevice painted
with utmost care
I brush away the hair
the fiber of my being
and lay them gently
upon you, bare
each touch a caress of hidden design
breaths drawn, fingers enthralled
with an attention to minor detail
I'd jump thru hoops for you
as i come across your scene
mountains of perseverance
where stamina finds the seam
no more rising early to an empty slate
the sea breeze washes off the stain
new life begins again
head to toe
each crease and crevice painted
with utmost care
I brush away the hair
the fiber of my being
and lay them gently
upon you, bare
Published 24th Apr 2019
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24th Apr 2019 1:34pm
This is beautiful Tim. I can feel the ray of sunshine spilling in this poem. I can see a rainbow after a storm in this spill.
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2019 3:39pm
Those last lines are complete vulnerability...to lay one's fibers of being bare for another...beautiful
24th Apr 2019 7:12pm
Anonymous
24th Apr 2019 4:51pm
Bruh !!
This is stellar !!!
This is stellar !!!
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24th Apr 2019 10:19pm
Fine work and, like Josh, I particularly admire that last stanza. Excellent...
24th Apr 2019 10:21pm
