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Poet's Workshop
A poetry idea sits waiting in my workshop.
Marking some initial lines with a carpenter’s pencil
I chain-saw the first cuts of a rough shape,
pillar-drill for deeper meaning
and tap some stanzas into position
always with an eye on planing the soundscape.
Aided by Axminster, Metabo, Ryobi, Festool
and my father’s old hand-tools
there are phrases to be filed
words to be shaped with sharp chisels
and grammar to be screwed in, one quarter-turn at a time.
If the whole thing somehow doesn’t look right
I get out the angle-grinder.
If that fails, only one thing for it:
the big Bosch demolition-hammer … and start again.
If it’s looking good, it goes in Grandfather’s 100 year old ‘weighs-a-ton’ vice
to squeeze out surplus words
before rounding the edges with a spokeshave
smoothing with one of several sanders
and polishing-oiling-polishing-oiling-polishing
until I’m sick of it. Then I know it’s ready.
“Josh, you’ve got more equipment than a bloody DIY store …”
I look at him askance and reply “I’m a poet for chrissakes,
I need all the power-tools I can lay my hands on”.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 23rd Apr 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
NaPo Day-23 contribution.
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
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Re. Poet's Workshop
23rd Apr 2019 2:37pm
Pens are too light
take a chisel to write.
It does feel like a physical exercise of sculpting something solid when writing a poem ... at least it does when I try and do it. You've captured that in your poem.
take a chisel to write.
It does feel like a physical exercise of sculpting something solid when writing a poem ... at least it does when I try and do it. You've captured that in your poem.
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Re. Poet's Workshop
23rd Apr 2019 2:49pm
Thank you - writing is a crafting process, just like making hand-weaving looms (which I used to do, not so much now but still have all the gear - just in case) :))
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2019 3:08pm
Daddy always said the best tool for the job was a good hammer...don't know that I agree with that thought. But your poem brought him to mind and made me smile. Grandpa was a master carpenter, Daddy a master mechanic, so this one settled right into my old home bones and brought me warm fuzzies. :-)
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23rd Apr 2019 3:15pm
Thank you Willow, glad to have played a part in a warm memory - and thank you for the RL. In days gone by when things were more simply and robustly made, I guess a hammer could fix them. Nowadays your average wheelbarrow, for example, might fall apart even from just looking at a 2lb lump-hammer. :))
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23rd Apr 2019 4:53pm
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23rd Apr 2019 6:01pm
Thank you - the posting on the comp page has a different picture showing the other half of the back wall :))
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23rd Apr 2019 5:12pm
Dewalt for me!! I dream of having a workshop with yellow and black power tools!
Of course, if i did, i might not get any writing done as i love to tinker and invent stuff.
Love, Love, Love
the Power Tool metaphors!
Of course, if i did, i might not get any writing done as i love to tinker and invent stuff.
Love, Love, Love
the Power Tool metaphors!
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23rd Apr 2019 6:06pm
I confess I have no "real men's" DeWalt tools. My workshop's 4x3 metres; even so it's amazing how many Bosch tools you can fit in, though efficient use has to be made of the ceiling as well. Thank you again for commenting. :))
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23rd Apr 2019 5:53pm
Josh, wordsmith, craftsman. Powerful way to blend both arts. You're amazing at capturing the emotion and the logic of composing.
I tip my cap sir.
I tip my cap sir.
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23rd Apr 2019 6:09pm
Thank you Wallyroo for such high praise - and the RL. I used to make hand-weaving looms - still do occasionally - so yunno, gotta hang on to all them tools.
Re. Poet's Workshop
23rd Apr 2019 8:39pm
The power tools work. You're one of the best poets here. Such craftsmanship!
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Thank you Crow, and for the RL. I aim to be more on the ball with your writes once NaPo month is over.
Meanwhile The Tale of Knight Kevin (posted 1st April") has stalled for lack of a story-line - any ideas are gratefully received.
Meanwhile The Tale of Knight Kevin (posted 1st April") has stalled for lack of a story-line - any ideas are gratefully received.
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23rd Apr 2019 11:03pm
What would happen if Knight Kevin were to eat moldy Rye bread and experience an Acid trip?
Would he wake to see the world in a different light? Knight Kevin down the rabbit hole. Ely
Would he wake to see the world in a different light? Knight Kevin down the rabbit hole. Ely
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23rd Apr 2019 11:26pm
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This piece made me giggle...
it's more than passing strange
The woodshop as analogy
for poetry..I love it.
why not..?
make up the rules as you go...it is your piece, after all...Ely
it's more than passing strange
The woodshop as analogy
for poetry..I love it.
why not..?
make up the rules as you go...it is your piece, after all...Ely
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23rd Apr 2019 11:25pm
Thank you, and for the RL too - I guess everything (life, woodwork, poetry) progresses one demolition job after another. :))
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23rd Apr 2019 11:23pm
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23rd Apr 2019 11:30pm
Thank you for your kind words. I won't be able to get me head out the door now :))
"you've learned your craft" oh noo noo noo not "learned" - learning (ever present tense). And thank you for the RL. Much appreciated.
"you've learned your craft" oh noo noo noo not "learned" - learning (ever present tense). And thank you for the RL. Much appreciated.
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23rd Apr 2019 11:36pm
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23rd Apr 2019 11:46pm
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24th Apr 2019 8:57pm
Brilliant description of your writing process. I love the part about polishing your pieces until you're sick of them - it really shows how much time and thought you put into your work!
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24th Apr 2019 9:22pm
Thank you Rosegold. The polishing process was the same when I was an academic writing journal articles. At some point I couldn't stand to look at it and fiddle with it any more and sent it off. With NaPo, of course, time is more limited - not a bad thing. :))
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29th Jan 2020 2:02pm
Woodworking - a pleasing and apt metaphor for the poetic process.
First time that I have seen “spokeshave” in a poem. Such a delightful tool.
First time that I have seen “spokeshave” in a poem. Such a delightful tool.
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30th Jan 2020 2:40pm
Thank you SeaCat for following up on the link. And yep, it's the first and only time I've used the word "spokeshave" in a poem - may the last time too :)) Cheers, Josh.