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The Sun To Her Darkness
Beneath her obsidian sky
She wandered amongst the densest fog
Blues glazed with drops of brine
A golden heart turned tarnished
Pierced by thorns of rage
The starlet in her own reverie of darkness
Melancholy heavily imbued upon her soul
All caged up in bane
Veins laced with the unrelentless cold
In blackened periphery, she found his sun
A twist in the starlets plot
Brine glazed blues; only his love expunged
She wandered amongst the densest fog
Blues glazed with drops of brine
A golden heart turned tarnished
Pierced by thorns of rage
The starlet in her own reverie of darkness
Melancholy heavily imbued upon her soul
All caged up in bane
Veins laced with the unrelentless cold
In blackened periphery, she found his sun
A twist in the starlets plot
Brine glazed blues; only his love expunged
Published 19th Apr 2019
| Edited 20th Apr 2019
Author's Note
I wrote this for my hubby. True love is hard work!!♡
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19th Apr 2019 5:26pm
i read a deep love that is about to be opened that has been hidden
and suprest for years bestowed on him
sweet loving write
and suprest for years bestowed on him
sweet loving write
19th Apr 2019 6:40pm
19th Apr 2019 11:21pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
19th Apr 2019 6:41pm
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19th Apr 2019 7:55pm
Thank you. I so appreciate it. I love this word too. I'm coming back around to check you in a few. I have catching up to do!
19th Apr 2019 7:23pm
19th Apr 2019 7:57pm
Thank you, dear one! I'm catching up with you in a few. I'm soooooo behind!🙃
19th Apr 2019 7:58pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
19th Apr 2019 8:27pm
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20th Apr 2019 2:03am
19th Apr 2019 9:18pm
,Brava, Pandora! This is stark, beautiful piece. I love the ronance of the light dispelling darkness
20th Apr 2019 2:04am
Thank you so very much. I have so much catching up to do. Coming to you soon! Forgive my absence as I wasn't feeling well
20th Apr 2019 6:23am
20th Apr 2019 9:11pm
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20th Apr 2019 4:40am
That is so touching that you wrote this for your husband, it's such a lovely write x
20th Apr 2019 9:12pm
Thank you so much Emily. I'm tickled pink to see you here on my write as well. Thanks for the gracious add too.🌷
Anonymous
20th Apr 2019 5:30am
Pandora.. damn that's love.. what a wonderful ode to him.. into the list it goes.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
20th Apr 2019 9:13pm
20th Apr 2019 7:26am
I think that is something many people don't understand. True love takes so much work. A lot of understanding. But we'll worth it 😁
Wonderful, Shannon.
Wonderful, Shannon.
20th Apr 2019 9:18pm
Thank you so much my darling goober!😁
Yes it's very much well worth it! You especially realize in the darkest of times when it's needed more than ever too!
Xo
Yes it's very much well worth it! You especially realize in the darkest of times when it's needed more than ever too!
Xo
20th Apr 2019 8:03am
Lovely tribute to your hubby, bless him. Overall it reads to me as a portrayal the love of one's spouse as a light at the end of a tunnel or in your times of darkness.
20th Apr 2019 9:19pm
Thank you, sweet Solomon...
Yes, he is very much so. We're getting better as we age!
Yes, he is very much so. We're getting better as we age!
20th Apr 2019 6:34pm
20th Apr 2019 9:20pm
Thank you, sweets. Greatly appreciated. He's never going to understand it though 😀
20th Apr 2019 9:29pm
20th Apr 2019 9:43pm
I'm left in awe of your comment! Thank you for so much kindness. It means a lot!♡
