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shooting the shit
wipe your ass on my refined sensibilities
yeah you fucker I'm talking to you
I'll ride your belt buckle into hell
you with your backwater talk
it turns me on...
backhand me with the blood and sweat of you
drunk on your semen
I spit my bad juju at you...
I'm a damned bitch I got nothing better to do
I infuriate you, yeah I know
but you'll never forget me
I'll be branded in your brain
mickey mouse on cocaine
talking loud shit from my sideways smile
I'm masturbating madness
this is why you opened my page, after all,
yeah, you...
you know I'll get you off
Published 12th Apr 2019
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2019 9:47pm
Oh, dear Gawd I love your mind beautiful, Brenda! So loved this...makes me wanna throw a middle finger to this week and say..."Tequila time mother#$@$:" 🤗🤗🤗🤗
12th Apr 2019 9:49pm
thank you beautiful Soulz just my kind of lady I'm here sippin some whiskey lol...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
12th Apr 2019 9:51pm
Oh, cheers girl.
12th Apr 2019 10:01pm
Anonymous
12th Apr 2019 10:05pm
😘
12th Apr 2019 9:56pm
You have a knack for the raw writing that dazzles me. Eloquence and thrills abound, in equal measure. It's always a pleasure. Wonderful work as always, Brenda.
12th Apr 2019 10:00pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for the love I've missed you all...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
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12th Apr 2019 10:28pm
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12th Apr 2019 10:43pm
Anonymous
12th Apr 2019 10:31pm
You are so fucking unique!
12th Apr 2019 10:44pm
Anonymous
12th Apr 2019 10:33pm
How I missed your hot and poisonous nips, my sweet one. I'm so glad to read this. Even in darkness, you are the mistress of the word, my inspiration and my first true goddess of poetry and passion. You know I worship you. It isn't a secret. You gave me the courage to open my mind, my heart and my mouth to be honest to myself. This place would be empty without you. Love you always. 💖
12th Apr 2019 10:45pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis beautiful soul your love means the world to me... I love your poetry you move me deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
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12th Apr 2019 11:04pm
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12th Apr 2019 11:31pm
12th Apr 2019 11:35pm
Anonymous
13th Apr 2019 2:05am
Defiant bite here, my beautiful Dark Angel. Got those stilettos out again, I see. I love you, girl...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
Anonymous
13th Apr 2019 6:02am
Gotta watch out
for that ``juju`` ... it does spit
love you, Lady
13th Apr 2019 6:46am
Oh no you di 'unt....mickey mouse on some cocaine...damn serious a poetic rain...
Always wonderfully intense, Crims...I wouldn't have it any other way...
love
Jeff
p,s don't forget you write to get cha self off too, babe....aren't we lucky
Always wonderfully intense, Crims...I wouldn't have it any other way...
love
Jeff
p,s don't forget you write to get cha self off too, babe....aren't we lucky
13th Apr 2019 1:30pm
