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زندگی سبق
زندگی سبق
I've always enjoyed dancing on the parallels
moving from one to the other, enjoying, learning
teaches you balance and appreciation
If one listens they can discover the beauty in life
Its sorrowful that it just seems
there is always someone
living in that pesky third rail
wishing to grab and hold you captive
and I need to pole vault over them
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For My Brother
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6th Apr 2019 3:24pm
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6th Apr 2019 5:44pm
Thank you, Josh.
This was inspired by many conversations with a now true friend here on DU over the many differences between people around the world in regard to religion, culture, ethic origin and etc. and the reasons some can not accept something that is different from their own.
*Also, I was needing something to write for today, so, please excuse the verbiage. :-))
This was inspired by many conversations with a now true friend here on DU over the many differences between people around the world in regard to religion, culture, ethic origin and etc. and the reasons some can not accept something that is different from their own.
*Also, I was needing something to write for today, so, please excuse the verbiage. :-))
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6th Apr 2019 3:34pm
very evocative piece, Brenda..
it really illustrates the contrast between two mind-sets...
and the filters through which we see our world.
it carries a wealth of emotion...Thanks for the good read...hugs, Ely
it really illustrates the contrast between two mind-sets...
and the filters through which we see our world.
it carries a wealth of emotion...Thanks for the good read...hugs, Ely
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6th Apr 2019 5:54pm
Very astute observation. Sometimes it takes the accumulation of years before we can appreciate what surrounds us.
Thank you, Ely.
Thank you, Ely.
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7th Apr 2019 4:43pm
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2019 5:14pm
Yeah, like that!!!
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6th Apr 2019 6:05pm
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2019 6:10pm
I visit because I love to read...I read your ink because you inspire my need...my thirst for words greater than lust..but you know that already...in words do we trust!!!
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7th Apr 2019 11:37am
Ur wisdom n truly compassionate soul is a marvel to behold my friend...excellent stuff here :)
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7th Apr 2019 7:28pm
Hi, Poe, good to see you around the neighbor, hanging in there.
Yes, you're absolutely correct, the stages. Extremely tests faith, but when you have it, it will get you through.
Hope all will pass, then comes the remembering and appreciation of the times before this.
May peace be a co-traveler, my friend.
Yes, you're absolutely correct, the stages. Extremely tests faith, but when you have it, it will get you through.
Hope all will pass, then comes the remembering and appreciation of the times before this.
May peace be a co-traveler, my friend.
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7th Apr 2019 11:06pm
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10th Apr 2019 12:36pm
blessings.
are found those who look for them.
some found deep, deep underground.
and for them one asks do i truly deserve this much goodness in my life? :-)
words. deep. direct. and the sentiment is beyond tidal...
are found those who look for them.
some found deep, deep underground.
and for them one asks do i truly deserve this much goodness in my life? :-)
words. deep. direct. and the sentiment is beyond tidal...
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10th Apr 2019 4:50pm
Never, never question your worthiness.
Anything that enters your life that you welcome with open arms has done so because you are the beacon that draws them.
Truly felt the need for the dedication.
Anything that enters your life that you welcome with open arms has done so because you are the beacon that draws them.
Truly felt the need for the dedication.