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Broken
I feel like im failing at this thing called life
I am running out of time
At times I hide and cry and come out drying my eyes
Do you see it? Do you even care? God why can't I undo what's so unfair all you do is play games and sit in that chair
Fuck how can't you see me how is this shit even ok I guess one day you'll realize it as I am walking away
I am running out of time
At times I hide and cry and come out drying my eyes
Do you see it? Do you even care? God why can't I undo what's so unfair all you do is play games and sit in that chair
Fuck how can't you see me how is this shit even ok I guess one day you'll realize it as I am walking away
Published 2nd Apr 2019
Author's Note
Just felt invisible
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2nd Apr 2019 8:15pm
This one has such perfect flow ... love the structure ... raw ... vulnerable ... true ... bravo my poetess ...
2nd Apr 2019 11:07pm
Why thank u . I kinda go with the flow of these emotions I have . it gets hard to write at times due to so many thoughts running thru my head. I appreciate your comment . thank you
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
3rd Apr 2019 00:21am
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3rd Apr 2019 00:29am
3rd Apr 2019 10:57pm
my first read of your write
find it deeply and openly true it is a bitch not to be noticed
awesome write
find it deeply and openly true it is a bitch not to be noticed
awesome write
4th Apr 2019 1:23am
23rd May 2019 10:50pm
You speak about it being hard to write. Don't worry about it being "grammatically correct" or "structurally sound". Getting your thoughts on paper is a lot more important and you have certainly done that in this. A very good write.
23rd May 2019 11:03pm
