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Hear me
everywhere I go.. I can feel it..
the tormenting tension
trickling throughout
the aggravated
atmosphere..
the confusion
is clear it contaminates
all that's near as we fill with fear
no doubt I've made that rhyme before
but..
I can't take it anymore..
too much to bear
too many tears
to wipe away
at the end of the day.
what can I say?
gotta get away
gotta get away
anyone else feel this way?
am I alone?
it would "appear so"
I just don't know..
just where to go
or just what to do,
gotta make a choice
if I wanna make it through.
gotta raise my voice if
I want you to hear me to.
no more can I stay untrue
I would be a fool to
fake my way through
the feelings and the presence of pain
permeating our brains resulting in
unstable insanity..
can't conform to the chaos
this culture has confined itself to..
won't chain myself to the same calamity
or crisis they've lost their life in..
its a shame and should be a sin to sell your soul to a society for the sole purpose of survival,
reality shouldn't be our rival
we should revel in the glory of revival,
take a trip back to the tribal days
without the cannibalistic craze
in the way of recognizing
we're all the same playing some game
in existence..
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Re. Hear me
26th Mar 2019 2:35pm
You're not alone, thinking some tropical island where the pace is slow and the beauty is free
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26th Mar 2019 10:37pm
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26th Mar 2019 10:38pm
Re. Hear me
Anonymous
26th Mar 2019 3:13pm
It's both a comfort and a sadness that so many are feeling the strain of this world these days. On one hand, we're not alone. On the other... I feel this one deeply.
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Re: Re. Hear me
26th Mar 2019 11:50pm
Re. Hear me
26th Mar 2019 3:27pm
Not betraying yourself in the midst of betrayal is one of the most powerful lessons you could learn, Hunter. You will undoubtedly master it. Knowing is half the battle - though it doesn't make the task any easier.
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Re: Re. Hear me
26th Mar 2019 11:56pm
Absolutely 🙏 so appreciate your wise and inspiring words Ahavati !
Your comments always cheer me up and make me think about things differently
Thanks so much!🙏
Your comments always cheer me up and make me think about things differently
Thanks so much!🙏
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2019 5:06pm
Hunter,
What feeling in that, Buddy! Tremendous. I could feel the ache. The world is something. I can't figure it. I'm not that big on it. But it does have glimpses of good, sometimes.
Nice write, my friend!
Matthew.
What feeling in that, Buddy! Tremendous. I could feel the ache. The world is something. I can't figure it. I'm not that big on it. But it does have glimpses of good, sometimes.
Nice write, my friend!
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Hear me
26th Mar 2019 11:59pm
Appreciate you MZ!
Thanks for stopping by 🙏
I can't figure it out either m8
Shits a mess
But yes glimpses of good for sure
Which I try to surround myself with
Thanks so much for reading!
Thanks for stopping by 🙏
I can't figure it out either m8
Shits a mess
But yes glimpses of good for sure
Which I try to surround myself with
Thanks so much for reading!
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Anonymous
27th Mar 2019 2:05am
You're a good man, my friend!
MZ.
MZ.
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2019 7:28pm
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26th Mar 2019 11:59pm
Re. Hear me
26th Mar 2019 10:52pm
Wow Shaman! So much truth in this ink. But if we dont notice and make change no one will. Unfortunately, society is full of sheep with the mob mentality. The path of least resistance. But random acts of kindness are contagious as well.
This piece actually immediately reminded me of a song "All I Know" by the Screaming Trees *I know crazy name but give it a listen
https://youtu.be/F6JC2jChudo
This piece actually immediately reminded me of a song "All I Know" by the Screaming Trees *I know crazy name but give it a listen
https://youtu.be/F6JC2jChudo
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Re: Re. Hear me
27th Mar 2019 00:13am
Thanks so very much Minx!🙏
Really appreciate this great comment
I so agree with your wise and accurate words
Thanks for reading
Glad you liked
And I'll give it a listen! I'm pretty sure I've heard that band name before
Appreciate you!
Really appreciate this great comment
I so agree with your wise and accurate words
Thanks for reading
Glad you liked
And I'll give it a listen! I'm pretty sure I've heard that band name before
Appreciate you!
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27th Mar 2019 00:20am
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Re: Re. Hear me
27th Mar 2019 1:00am
I believe our stars are aligning for some reason Sky?! They are soo goid . Kinda like Shaman's piece!!
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27th Mar 2019 1:04am
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Re. Hear me
28th Mar 2019 2:33am
"what can I say?
gotta get away
gotta get away
anyone else feel this way?"
ALL. THE. TIME.
However, we're never truly alone even if our only support comes from DU. I hope all is well, great poem x
gotta get away
gotta get away
anyone else feel this way?"
ALL. THE. TIME.
However, we're never truly alone even if our only support comes from DU. I hope all is well, great poem x
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Re: Re. Hear me
28th Mar 2019 11:17am
Appreciate you reading emilyrose!
Thanks for this great comment
I so agree the deep is such a special place
Appreciate your kindness!🙏
Thanks for this great comment
I so agree the deep is such a special place
Appreciate your kindness!🙏