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Where She Is Today
I wonder where she is today
My vicious former love
She may be there in Hell to stay
Not in the arms of Lord above
She devoured all my heart
Each morsel down her throat
She ripped my fragile world apart
And then that smile became a gloat
If I seem angry, so be it
My memory does burn
I will endeavor not to keep it lit
Or wish her cremains in an urn.
My vicious former love
She may be there in Hell to stay
Not in the arms of Lord above
She devoured all my heart
Each morsel down her throat
She ripped my fragile world apart
And then that smile became a gloat
If I seem angry, so be it
My memory does burn
I will endeavor not to keep it lit
Or wish her cremains in an urn.
Published 23rd Mar 2019
Author's Note
Pure fiction. My loves have been almost entirely reasonable. Sometimes at a price.
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 7:17pm
Ouch! but *sigh*
it`s total pure fiction!
Loved the humor, sir Crow
~Devlin
23rd Mar 2019 7:38pm
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Devlin. My loves have been far and few between, and I wish them well. Thank you!
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 7:37pm
the author's note tho lol
ohhhh gosh
lovers all like a bag of liquorice....
.... it takes all sorts
thank you for much needed giggles
xo
ohhhh gosh
lovers all like a bag of liquorice....
.... it takes all sorts
thank you for much needed giggles
xo
23rd Mar 2019 7:40pm
Delighted I could supply. I love black humor, however malicious. Thank you shadoe!
23rd Mar 2019 7:46pm
To display such emotion when writing pure fiction is the trait of a skilled writer. Great work.
23rd Mar 2019 8:29pm
Thank you so much, Rjm. My love life has rarely been what it should be, so now I conjure some fairly extreme scenarios. The break ups were generally my fault, sometimes entirely.
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 8:40pm
Incredibly emotional...but glad I read your note. Your craft of words are just exquisite lovely, Thomas.
23rd Mar 2019 9:08pm
I suppose I've really been pretty lucky. The one "love of my life" and I are at least still friends. Thank you SoulzGirl, for the sweet comment and RL entry!
25th Mar 2019 7:22pm
23rd Mar 2019 8:48pm
23rd Mar 2019 9:33pm
I'm glad you can look back at the past with what is, judging by your writes, a remarkable sense of humor. Thank you!
23rd Mar 2019 9:24pm
23rd Mar 2019 9:34pm
There have been some rough moments, but nothing insurmountable. Thank you JusTim!
25th Mar 2019 7:23pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
1st May 2019 3:21am
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