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wishful promises
the dust settles between words
no longer hiding
succumbing to the beauty
that lies between
thoughts and whispers
that echo with brushes
delicate as butterfly wings
don't be afraid
there is no harm here
in the palm of my open hands
gathering you will be sublime
delicate fingers will not remove
the fragrant dust
of your thoughts
they will be gathered
flowers in my vase
of tranquility
held fast in each breath
and beat of heart
never allowed to fade
or wither in my care
no longer hiding
succumbing to the beauty
that lies between
thoughts and whispers
that echo with brushes
delicate as butterfly wings
don't be afraid
there is no harm here
in the palm of my open hands
gathering you will be sublime
delicate fingers will not remove
the fragrant dust
of your thoughts
they will be gathered
flowers in my vase
of tranquility
held fast in each breath
and beat of heart
never allowed to fade
or wither in my care
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Re. wishful promises
23rd Mar 2019 00:55am
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29th Mar 2019 2:55pm
Thank you Tim for the thoughtful comments and add to your RL .. greatly appreciated
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 1:20am
This brings to mind sunlight illuminating the beauty of dust in the air. Makes it iridescent. Soft and delicate
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29th Mar 2019 2:56pm
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23rd Mar 2019 10:16am
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29th Mar 2019 2:57pm
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23rd Mar 2019 6:53pm
Brava Jemac! Your serene words bring me peace. A much needed gift mid the vicissitudes of life. Merci beaucoup!
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29th Mar 2019 3:00pm
Thank you so much Gahddess .. for your beautiful comments and add to your RL ... humbled and honored that you found comfort here. x
JeJe
JeJe
Re. wishful promises
25th Mar 2019 9:57pm
I just read a beautiful poem by JusTim and now I find this piece of wonderful magic ink J...just incredible!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. wishful promises
29th Mar 2019 3:02pm
Thank you so much Harry for your wonderful comments and the add to your RL ... greatly appreciated
JeJe
JeJe
Re. wishful promises
27th Mar 2019 3:19am
youve given us a peace of mind with every textured morsel,
very lovely, JeM
always so refreshing <3
very lovely, JeM
always so refreshing <3
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29th Mar 2019 3:03pm
Thank you so much Howlings for your lovely comments .. greatly appreciated x
JeJe ♡
JeJe ♡
Re. wishful promises
28th Mar 2019 6:07pm
With such a sentiment, beautifully put, the write thing is allowed to do itself.
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29th Mar 2019 3:04pm
Re. wishful promises
29th Mar 2019 3:04pm
This is so lovely, Je Je. It's a humble offering from one who has suffered so much hurt.
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29th Mar 2019 3:07pm
Who cut the onions in here ? lol
Thank you so much Ahavati for your lovely comments ... greatly appreciated dear one ♡x
JeJe
Thank you so much Ahavati for your lovely comments ... greatly appreciated dear one ♡x
JeJe