The Rent's Due, Time To Move

The underlying is the sad truth but I'm loving the parody

No argument here, Tim.

Thanks

This is fantastic!
I very much dig this masterpiece 👏
I especially enjoyed this particular verse
"Flooding rivers and this fucking heat
dead leaves to rake and burn
snow which gathers up pass my ass
yet you show no concern "
Ha this is so accurate and so fantastic
Great write!

The accuracy, I fear is nearly dead on.

Thanks, for the feedback, Hunter.

While it is a good entry,  it does indeed permeate such a sadness.  

While I agree on the sadness, I think I missed the mark on the comical theme of the comp.

Having personally dealt ( and currently dealing with a narcissist ) - I will have to agree with you.  There was definitely nothing humorous about this write. But it was good, nonetheless.

Perhaps in some way cathartic?

heh....rent's due and the move long overdue...

this vibe hits  hard at the solar plexus of this makeshift society..

Never pass up a chance to apply a slap upside the head.

This is a wonderful write, Amorous_tryst.  My favorite lines:

Oceans full of plastics
and smog to fill the skies
my cares are quite elastic
of creatures that may die  

But this is fine work all the way.  It may or may not fit the expectations of the comp's comical theme, but personally I love it.

Thank you Sir Crow. for the kind words.
I did enjoy taking a different spin on my previous poem, even though there was some cringing during the rewrite.

great poem, and title

Thank you for your generous words.

Much appriciated

Found this by way of random poem. I’m quite anal about recycling— I’m a bit of an enviro-chick tree-hugger type. This got me thinking about this space rock I’m floating about on and how I want to leave it shiny for the people I leave behind. Fair bit of sass in it too, and I appreciated that.

Thanks for sharing.

-M

You and I both sister, won't even flip a butt out the window, let alone other trash. Recycle everything I possibly can and then some, even when I shouldn't.
Got grandsons and hopefully great grand kids who will be here long after I've left,possibly yours as well, and ain't expecting them to clean up the mess.

Thanks for commenting.