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Covet Springs
You tried to come to me
quietly tip-toeing across
the sanded rice paper
Tried to touch me with a
stealth so that I might feel
yet not know the intent or
reasons for return.
Coveting eternal wet from
Springs of hope
and hopelessness
You and me lost our ability
to overcome our verbal
confusion.
Oft I know I am in want;
we’re a desperation
full of covet eternal
springing forth tears of
perhaps, sad,
more so maybe it is
self-directed anger
for our cowardice.
Goddess that BE –
how I long for the
eternal springs of
melting divine
that is our RIGHT when
awakened, we meld
into one another’s
7 Chakras!!
Come to me quietly
and let us whisper
and embrace our
lust together.
quietly tip-toeing across
the sanded rice paper
Tried to touch me with a
stealth so that I might feel
yet not know the intent or
reasons for return.
Coveting eternal wet from
Springs of hope
and hopelessness
You and me lost our ability
to overcome our verbal
confusion.
Oft I know I am in want;
we’re a desperation
full of covet eternal
springing forth tears of
perhaps, sad,
more so maybe it is
self-directed anger
for our cowardice.
Goddess that BE –
how I long for the
eternal springs of
melting divine
that is our RIGHT when
awakened, we meld
into one another’s
7 Chakras!!
Come to me quietly
and let us whisper
and embrace our
lust together.
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 20th Mar 2019
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Re. Covet Springs
Anonymous
21st Mar 2019 5:14am
Tallen,
Quite powerful longing, my friend. Great writing as usual.
I was moved by that.
MZ.
Quite powerful longing, my friend. Great writing as usual.
I was moved by that.
MZ.
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Re: Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 10:01am
i think, now that i'm living alone again
the longing will ever exist an writing about it
comes easy now.
thank You for the kind praise, Brother
the longing will ever exist an writing about it
comes easy now.
thank You for the kind praise, Brother
Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 8:41am
Re: Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 10:02am
appreciate the wonderful feeling and insight
Beautiful Sister
Honored for the RL add
Beautiful Sister
Honored for the RL add
Anonymous
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21st Mar 2019 9:12am
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Re: Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 10:04am
as we are all connected
our Spirituality is ever present
ever blossoming
thank You for wonderful comments
always Happy You enjoyed reading,
Melia
our Spirituality is ever present
ever blossoming
thank You for wonderful comments
always Happy You enjoyed reading,
Melia
Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 11:24am
This is a great piece tallen powerful and profoundly moving I enjoyed 👏
These lines hit me the hardest
"Coveting eternal wet from
Springs of hope
and hopelessness
You and me lost our ability
to overcome our verbal
confusion. "
"self-directed anger
for our cowardice. "
Left me speechless m8 resonates so deeply
excellent penning 👏
These lines hit me the hardest
"Coveting eternal wet from
Springs of hope
and hopelessness
You and me lost our ability
to overcome our verbal
confusion. "
"self-directed anger
for our cowardice. "
Left me speechless m8 resonates so deeply
excellent penning 👏
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Re: Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 3:25pm
always appreciative when a reader
finds depth and my words
touch
thank You for the kind praise
finds depth and my words
touch
thank You for the kind praise
Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 1:31pm
Re: Re. Covet Springs
21st Mar 2019 3:28pm
Re. Covet Springs
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2019 4:46pm
i read this at work and just decided to let it settle a little before rushing into a comment...
... there is something so... sweetly tentative... here;
it's a breath of fresh air to all the swagger and over confidence and uhm cock measuring that pervades so much erotica
a pleasure to read
~ k
... there is something so... sweetly tentative... here;
it's a breath of fresh air to all the swagger and over confidence and uhm cock measuring that pervades so much erotica
a pleasure to read
~ k
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Re: Re. Covet Springs
22nd Mar 2019 7:44pm
You Honor me with not only the RL add
but with thoughtful wonderful comments
as I've read Your spills and think
You are a master at eroticism.
thank You for reading and sharing with me
but with thoughtful wonderful comments
as I've read Your spills and think
You are a master at eroticism.
thank You for reading and sharing with me
Re. Covet Springs
25th Mar 2019 11:35pm
Re: Re. Covet Springs
I spilled this ink for a reread
even me
and me rereading the responses
Honored for the RL add
even me
and me rereading the responses
Honored for the RL add
Re. Covet Springs
"Coveting eternal wet from
Springs of hope
and hopelessness
You and me lost our ability
to overcome our verbal
confusion."
.... lines that sear, imo
I loved your 200th offering, T. It was sexy and full of desire, like
"we’re a desperation
full of covet eternal"...
as well as extremely moving.
I basked in reading this and let it soak in as I thoroughly enjoyed the thoughts and feelings that emanated from within...
Just an exquisitely written spill, T
Ty for sharing, my friend
🌹
xo
Springs of hope
and hopelessness
You and me lost our ability
to overcome our verbal
confusion."
.... lines that sear, imo
I loved your 200th offering, T. It was sexy and full of desire, like
"we’re a desperation
full of covet eternal"...
as well as extremely moving.
I basked in reading this and let it soak in as I thoroughly enjoyed the thoughts and feelings that emanated from within...
Just an exquisitely written spill, T
Ty for sharing, my friend
🌹
xo
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Re: Re. Covet Springs
9th Apr 2021 7:10pm
Damn it!!
Now more than ever i wish i would be sipping super HOT tea at Your domicile!!!
No way is this spill as good as Your 200th
but i delight in Your delight and humbled by Your RL
Now more than ever i wish i would be sipping super HOT tea at Your domicile!!!
No way is this spill as good as Your 200th
but i delight in Your delight and humbled by Your RL