Poems
Spoken Word
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets
Toggle navigation
Create Account
Log In
Poems and Stories
Spoken Word Poetry
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets and Writers
Search
Help
This website requires Javascript to work properly, please enable Javascript in your web browser settings.
Welcome to Deep Underground Poetry. This website uses cookies.
Continue
Find Out More
Poems
River
she loves me
deepundergroundpoetry.com
she loves me
Written by
cabcool
Published
19th Mar 2019
Like This?
Poems by Author
Author's Note
In this Octet (Copy/paste this link to see larger image:
http://mydo.cx/NWY5OTM4), the successive lines have been contoured (arched) to create articulated symmetry.
Comment
#jealousy
#love
#relationships
#river
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes
3
reading list entries
1
comments
6
reads
1740
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. she loves me
Tallen
(earth_empath)
19th Mar 2019 7:31pm
Felt some wry humor to this spill
Loving the graphic, too
Read poems by Tallen
0
Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
20th Mar 2019 2:06am
Ha ha!
I was playing on the well-known "She loves me, she loves me not" expression.
Thanks for the graphic encouragement.
Read poems by cabcool
Re. she loves me
Ahavati
(Tams)
20th Mar 2019 3:41pm
Pucker up! Beautiful presentation!
Read poems by Ahavati
0
Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
20th Mar 2019 4:48pm
Sincerely, I thank you, Ahavati.
Read poems by cabcool
Re. she loves me
LightWithin256
22nd Mar 2019 3:19pm
I love this! Everything about this was just enjoyable. :) Well done.
Read poems by LightWithin256
0
Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
- Edited 22nd Mar 2019 3:34pm
22nd Mar 2019 3:32pm
She loves it!
(That's you and the poem.)
Seriously: thanks, LightWithin, for reading my work and giving me such encouraging feedback.
I'm glad you love "she loves me." Honoured for the RL inclusion.
Sincerely
cab
Read poems by cabcool
Latest Forum Discussions
SPEAKEASY
2025 Official NaPoWriMo Discussion Thread!
Today 3:34am by Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
1
...
14
15
16
17
18
COMPETITIONS
DU Official NaPoWriMo Challenge
Today 3:08am by Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
1
2
3
4
5
6
COMPETITIONS
DARK!
Today 2:31am by ReggiePoet
(Reggie)
1
2
POETRY
Your favourite collaborations from DU poets.
Today 2:13am by Tallen
(earth_empath)
1
2
3
COMPETITIONS
Journey to the Stars, NaPoWriMo'25 Stomp the Prompt Comp
Today 2:05am by wallyroo92
SPEAKEASY
So, how are we all?
Today 1:34am by Ahavati
(Tams)
1
...
65
66
67
68
69
Online Now
×
Close
Online Now
DamianDeadLove
fianaturie8
bcpoet
backdeckbenny
Stoney223
LibraSoul96
goldenmyst
Grace
Indie
Isgyppie_
DaisyGrace
nutbuster
Members Online: 12
Close
×
Close
Error
Close