Poems
Spoken Word
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets
Toggle navigation
Create Account
Log In
Poems and Stories
Spoken Word Poetry
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets and Writers
Search
Help
This website requires Javascript to work properly, please enable Javascript in your web browser settings.
Welcome to Deep Underground Poetry. This website uses cookies.
Continue
Find Out More
Poems
River
she loves me
deepundergroundpoetry.com
she loves me
Written by
cabcool
Published
19th Mar 2019
Like This?
Poems by Author
Author's Note
In this Octet (Copy/paste this link to see larger image:
http://mydo.cx/NWY5OTM4), the successive lines have been contoured (arched) to create articulated symmetry.
Comment
#jealousy
#love
#relationships
#river
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes
3
reading list entries
1
comments
6
reads
1677
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. she loves me
Tallen
(earth_empath)
19th Mar 2019 7:31pm
Felt some wry humor to this spill
Loving the graphic, too
Read poems by Tallen
0
Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
20th Mar 2019 2:06am
Ha ha!
I was playing on the well-known "She loves me, she loves me not" expression.
Thanks for the graphic encouragement.
Read poems by cabcool
Re. she loves me
Ahavati
(Tams)
20th Mar 2019 3:41pm
Pucker up! Beautiful presentation!
Read poems by Ahavati
0
Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
20th Mar 2019 4:48pm
Sincerely, I thank you, Ahavati.
Read poems by cabcool
Re. she loves me
LightWithin256
22nd Mar 2019 3:19pm
I love this! Everything about this was just enjoyable. :) Well done.
Read poems by LightWithin256
0
Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
- Edited 22nd Mar 2019 3:34pm
22nd Mar 2019 3:32pm
She loves it!
(That's you and the poem.)
Seriously: thanks, LightWithin, for reading my work and giving me such encouraging feedback.
I'm glad you love "she loves me." Honoured for the RL inclusion.
Sincerely
cab
Read poems by cabcool
Latest Forum Discussions
SPEAKEASY
Kitty's Korner
Today 10:14pm by SweetKittyCat5
1
...
21
22
23
24
25
COMPETITIONS
Incense of Insomnia
Today 10:12pm by adagio
SPEAKEASY
Hypo Frost Magazine
Today 9:11pm by fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
COMPETITIONS
Poem of the Month - December 2024
Today 8:55pm by Ahavati
(Tams)
SPEAKEASY
Inspirational Qoutes from people, movies, books and self
Today 8:12pm by Ahavati
(Tams)
1
2
3
4
SPEAKEASY
Memes
Today 8:10pm by Ahavati
(Tams)
1
...
33
34
35
36
37
Online Now
×
Close
Online Now
Lilliputian
SweetKittyCat5
Marks
Everavalon
nutbuster
TheOralizer
adagio
LibraSoul96
PeaceFlpw
Altherock
Stoney223
MidnightSonneteer
missjem56
fianaturie8
Academic
Gahddess_Worship
RyanBlackborough
Shon
gothicsurrealism
Adzy
Members Online: 20
Close
×
Close
Error
Close