Atrocities

Oh, dearest poet! I was talking to a friend about this very tragedy last night. It's incredibly sad. Thank you for sharing this very emotional piece.

Hey soulzgirl thankyou for reading its not my normal type piece but i live in Australia and been to New Zealand many time so it was something close to me i really appreciate your comment and time.

No, thank you!

Timely and courageous write.

Hey sup Snugglebuck really appreciate your time for reading this.Im in Australia normally shootings happen on other side of the world no less tragic but so distant to hear the painful cries but this one happened on my doorstep so close so its like i feel all 50 voices crying.Thankyou for your comment.

it just shows how wicked the world still is and that wickedness amplified by the few idiots who employ it.

Hey CasketSharpe true dat. Thanks for taking your time in reading it i really appreciate it and your comment is fo realz.

Bold and telling write ... welcome to DUP ... thanks for sharing ...

LilDragonFly im actually speechless now im kinda like in awe of you ok dont want this getting all creepy stalker like lol but when i first discovered this site your poems were first i read and just blew my mind that words could take such beauty and shape and entwine with ones soul on such a deep level.Thankyou for taking time to read my first piece and commenting really means a lot coming from you.x

Aww ... *cyberhug* ... you made my day ... can't wait to read more of your poetry ...

cyberhug right back at you LilDragonfly once again thankyou so much.

Hey Renaissance Thankyou so much for the read and especially your comment.Like you described it was deplorable, a true act of a coward that cost 50 people there lives.I didnt know any of them but over last few days ive felt them inside me screaming for a voice so if my verse or poem or whatever u want to call it gave a voice to them then i feel like i did wat i set out to do.And hey if you cant post that poem onsite  email me here id love to read her poem.Thankyou again.

Bro that would be amazing id love that mate.Ill hit you up with a mail later on got to get to work now that ive cleaned up the milk Soulgirl spilled on me. You take care mate and ill talk to u soon.

Greetings, Poet, and warm welcome to the Deep. I’m Jade, and I want to thank you for your contientous expression of the horrific Christchurch tragedy.  

I also want to share with you, through this link below, a poem that was also written about the shootings, in which I added to a DU forum thread I started earlier last year, a forum that has a wealth of poetry from over the years. If the link takes you to the intro on the first page, once you see the purpose of this forum, go to page 10 and scroll down to the most recent posting, you can’t miss it for the image I put with it, a screen capture from New Zealand TV, shown via CNN.  

I’m sure you know by now how we in other parts of the world send out our prayers for all those directly affected by such heinous acts of senseless violence.

Thanks again, and take care, Jack.

~Jade

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/poetry/read/10280/135/

Hey Jade first of thankyou for the welcome im very humbled by yourself jade and  everyone that took time to read my verse and leave a comment  its a privilege  to be on a site with such warm and creative people and thankyou for the link i look forward to reading as many poems here as i can i love the power of words and the way they can rock you to your core.  

Like you I am Australian so we are at one with our New Zealand friends. Poignant and powerful poetry man. Just remember that when Nietzsche said god is dead he was looking to the future when we would be struggling to find any kind of universal values...as he said some 130 years ago...the 21st century will see wars like we have never seen before.
For all our innocent Muslim friends. Peace.
Cheers...Harry

Hey Sup Harry always good to hear from a brother countryman honestly mate thankyou for the read and especially the comment.Actually the Nietzsche line was more last minute i honestly wanted to use Nietzsches quote about if you gaze into a abyss long enough the abyss will gaze back to you i love the poignancy of that but it didnt fit the structure of my piece and my feelings at the time.But bro thankyou for your insight into the origin of Nietzsches god is dead quote.Your a legend bro.And yes our prayers are with all those suffering the loss of this cowardly attack

My pleasure Jack...and for a little more Nietzsche lol..."When fighting with monsters, take care not to become a monster oneself."

True dat harry.

This was really beautiful, and my heart really does go out to all those affected in the New Zealand attacks :)

whats a verse without a melody
beautiful name almost heavenly
welcome to my poetic vasectomy
and lyrical  lobotomy
quick someone call Dr phill
im dropping bombs Psychotically

Hey sup Melody and i did see your welcome message so thankyou for that and for reading my verse.

Leaves you aching for the world. It is truly a horrible tragedy what happened there in New Zealand. My heart goes out to all of the families that lost people, and for the corruption and evil that pushes people to do these kind of things.

I see that you are new to DU, and I just wanted to say welcome, and I look forward to seeing more of your work. Great expressivity and compassion seen here - I believe you are an empath!

Hey thankyou for the welcome but im sure weve met before im positive i say your name every new years eve when the clock strikes midnight and we raise our glasses To NewBeginings so your the one we always toast right ? hahaha.
But your so right not only leaves you aching for the world but leaves you aching in your own soul from these cowardly Atrocities that seem to happen way to frequently.We cant stop bullets with words but words have the power to heal and inspire thats why its important we express them in any shape or form like we all do here and pray for peaceful New Beginnings. Thank you so much again for the read and the beautiful comment really appreciate it. x