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If Ever The Chance
Would you have held me close?
As we rocked forward and back?
Would you have stolen a punch,
For their hands around my neck?
Would you have steeled my soul,
As I doubted my self-worth?
Would you have chased them down?
To the ends of the earth?
Would we have burned down their homes,
For the atrocities they did to me?
Would you blame their mothers?
For treating me so horribly?
Would we ruin their families,
With talk of how they held me down?
Would you have led the party,
Until these fuckers were found?
As we rocked forward and back?
Would you have stolen a punch,
For their hands around my neck?
Would you have steeled my soul,
As I doubted my self-worth?
Would you have chased them down?
To the ends of the earth?
Would we have burned down their homes,
For the atrocities they did to me?
Would you blame their mothers?
For treating me so horribly?
Would we ruin their families,
With talk of how they held me down?
Would you have led the party,
Until these fuckers were found?
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Re. If Ever The Chance
17th Mar 2019 2:48am
actually yes ... I am stupid like that Im told ... lovely write ... Bless and love ...
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Re. If Ever The Chance
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17th Mar 2019 1:10pm
Hahaha, I see no errors there. Death to any who would oppose!
Thank you for the read and for the comments, theyre greatly appreciated ❤️
Thank you for the read and for the comments, theyre greatly appreciated ❤️
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18th Mar 2019 9:32am
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Re: Re. If Ever The Chance
17th Mar 2019 3:31pm
Thank you! Oh that was so kind. Yes, the guardians of the underground. Thank you for the read, my friend. As well as the love and comments, all so greatly appreciated❤️
Re. If Ever The Chance
5th Jun 2019 00:51am
Check out this edge of your seat thrill ride!
I love how hard, emotional, and razor sharp this piece is!
Kudos!
I love how hard, emotional, and razor sharp this piece is!
Kudos!
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