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Walk Away
Does it make you feel better, baby?
Does it drown out all your fears?
Don’t you care that I don't approve?
Don't you see all of my tears?
Do you not feel any pain anymore,
When it finally finds that vein?
I’d say I’m quite surprised, but
To say that, I’d be declared insane
I’m not sure how to stop this ride,
Really don’t even know what to do.
I said I’d love you til our death,
Even at this rate, I still very much do.
You’re pushing the limits, my sweet,
This much you have always done.
I just wish the best for you, always
And to rise beside you like the sun.
Our ride could be cut short, though,
If we keep testing our fate this way.
You’ll drag us to our early graves,
If you simply cannot walk away.
I beg of you, absolute love of my life
Please don’t leave me here all by myself.
Cause that’s precisely what will happen,
If you continue to think of only yourself.
Does it drown out all your fears?
Don’t you care that I don't approve?
Don't you see all of my tears?
Do you not feel any pain anymore,
When it finally finds that vein?
I’d say I’m quite surprised, but
To say that, I’d be declared insane
I’m not sure how to stop this ride,
Really don’t even know what to do.
I said I’d love you til our death,
Even at this rate, I still very much do.
You’re pushing the limits, my sweet,
This much you have always done.
I just wish the best for you, always
And to rise beside you like the sun.
Our ride could be cut short, though,
If we keep testing our fate this way.
You’ll drag us to our early graves,
If you simply cannot walk away.
I beg of you, absolute love of my life
Please don’t leave me here all by myself.
Cause that’s precisely what will happen,
If you continue to think of only yourself.
Published 17th Mar 2019
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17th Mar 2019 4:02am
17th Mar 2019 4:04am
17th Mar 2019 4:05am
Kudos to you, not only do you tackle things that are obviously difficult to you but you do it so eloquently ... Bless and love ... ..
17th Mar 2019 4:09am
17th Mar 2019 4:13am
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
17th Mar 2019 4:14am
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17th Mar 2019 4:17am
I’m so happy you enjoyed, nothing makes me happier than actually feeling heard❤️ Thank you for the reads, kudos, my friend.
17th Mar 2019 8:16am
17th Mar 2019 8:19am
17th Mar 2019 8:33am
It’s this kind of 3am poetry I live for... when the words won’t stop and the feelings keep flowing. It feels honest, thank you for sharing ❤️ Xx
17th Mar 2019 8:57am
17th Mar 2019 1:34pm
17th Mar 2019 1:35pm
I agree, very hard to watch — thank you for the read, the love, and the comment❤️
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
17th Mar 2019 3:07pm
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17th Mar 2019 3:08pm
Thank you, it is. But, somedays I envy those who are selfish. Thank you for the read, the comment and always the love, my friend :)
17th Mar 2019 6:59pm
Limits and restriction are often evaporated when love walks in the door. Terrific write.
17th Mar 2019 7:08pm
18th Mar 2019 12:46pm
"I said I’d love you til our death,
Even at this rate, I still very much do."
very well said. Thanks for sharing this one with us and welcome home!
Even at this rate, I still very much do."
very well said. Thanks for sharing this one with us and welcome home!
18th Mar 2019 1:49pm
7th Jul 2019 3:53pm
There is no more helpless feeling than watching a loved one destroy themselves.
Great heart bearing write.
Great heart bearing write.
7th Jul 2019 6:44pm
