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Bouquet Taboo
We come to Paris, France our secret place,
Where lovers favor darkened corner booths.
To sip the wine d'amour bouquet taboo,
In embrace, our fable City of Light.
Mon cher escorts me in a horse-drawn cart,
Wrapped in my finery against the chill.
In winter’s slightest gust of evening frost,
We ride into the park under the trees.
For though there is a driver at the reins,
We seem to be the only two alive.
The fickle moon is nowhere to be seen,
A fugitive from love and lovers’ light.
We hug & kiss & hope the dawn sleeps in,
So that the sun won’t furrow thru’ the night.
The driver clicks his tongue and off we go,
To fascinate at Eiffel’s dazz’ling flood.
Where lovers favor darkened corner booths.
To sip the wine d'amour bouquet taboo,
In embrace, our fable City of Light.
Mon cher escorts me in a horse-drawn cart,
Wrapped in my finery against the chill.
In winter’s slightest gust of evening frost,
We ride into the park under the trees.
For though there is a driver at the reins,
We seem to be the only two alive.
The fickle moon is nowhere to be seen,
A fugitive from love and lovers’ light.
We hug & kiss & hope the dawn sleeps in,
So that the sun won’t furrow thru’ the night.
The driver clicks his tongue and off we go,
To fascinate at Eiffel’s dazz’ling flood.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 11th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Entered in the Deep competition “Through the Alphabet--The Letter "F", hosted by MadameLavender.
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Anonymous
11th Mar 2019 7:15pm
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11th Mar 2019 7:20pm
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11th Mar 2019 7:26pm
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11th Mar 2019 7:21pm
But of course you must, I will not take no for an answer, trysting sister...
And yes, a dreamy vision, no? x
And yes, a dreamy vision, no? x
Re. Bouquet Taboo
11th Mar 2019 10:18pm
A fine write, Jade. I was wondering why you italicized the f words until I saw the nature of the comp. This looks like a winner to me.
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13th Mar 2019 12:49pm
yes Mrs tiger ... for me the one word like here is at moment I am so touched that after lovely or some others , it would all go downhill ... so then Ive learned to keep it simple to honor the poet ... was truly lovely, Jade ...
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13th Mar 2019 1:03pm
Thank you, good sir. I hope you could tell I was being a tad playful. Your enjoyment & support of my craft is always appreciated.
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
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13th Mar 2019 1:20pm
yes and was also ... always look forward to good words as yours ... Bless and love ..
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 12:34pm
Romantic, promise of sensuality, the stimulation of a different and beautiful environment. Delicious.
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13th Mar 2019 1:35pm
Why thank you, sir Poet, how very kind of you to say... and it’s a pleasure to meet you.
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 3:25pm
Your words move me.
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
19th Mar 2019 6:21am
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19th Mar 2019 6:35am
Why thank you, Danny, for such an exclamation of appreciTion. And my goodness yes, Paris. Is amazing all around. x
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1st Apr 2019 7:50am
Ahh my darling Cat, dearest sister of my deeper muse...
your words of delight are devotions to Aphrodite rising!
So sayeth your Tigress 🐯💗
your words of delight are devotions to Aphrodite rising!
So sayeth your Tigress 🐯💗