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Real Poets Bleed
The pure beauty amid attraction
no holding back it gives, it gives
a place where thoughts breathe
and strength and true poetry lives
It's not pretty nor perfection
word upon word, letting of soul
forgiveness, angst and freedom
captured, allowing moments feeling whole
there's happiness and sunshine
a night of fantasy for two (or more)
but mainly it's moving forward
closing shut a heavy door
heartbeats wrapped up in a blanket
slowing down one second at a time
giving life to more than perspective
a freeing of the troubled mind
I strip, you watch
you bleed, I cry
no expectations needed
just another day inside
no holding back it gives, it gives
a place where thoughts breathe
and strength and true poetry lives
It's not pretty nor perfection
word upon word, letting of soul
forgiveness, angst and freedom
captured, allowing moments feeling whole
there's happiness and sunshine
a night of fantasy for two (or more)
but mainly it's moving forward
closing shut a heavy door
heartbeats wrapped up in a blanket
slowing down one second at a time
giving life to more than perspective
a freeing of the troubled mind
I strip, you watch
you bleed, I cry
no expectations needed
just another day inside
Published 5th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
5th Mar 2019 9:01am
I enjoyed reading this poem, the last two stanzas were my favourite, always good to read a poem that ends off with a punch:)
5th Mar 2019 9:03am
5th Mar 2019 9:35am
this is a screamer of a poem Tim! eachoed deep and for long inside my heart!
you nailed it brother! Poet!
excellent the rendering of truth!
you nailed it brother! Poet!
excellent the rendering of truth!
5th Mar 2019 9:48am
Anonymous
5th Mar 2019 10:24am
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5th Mar 2019 2:44pm
5th Mar 2019 10:46am
About moving forward. Kind of how I see my poems. A release of something. Great poem.
5th Mar 2019 2:45pm
5th Mar 2019 11:54am
dearest Tim those final lines really stole my breath
you are deeply felt...
love Brenda ❤
you are deeply felt...
love Brenda ❤
5th Mar 2019 2:46pm
5th Mar 2019 12:18pm
5th Mar 2019 2:47pm
Haha, reminds me of a cheer I taught my daughter,said don't let Coach know, "shall we give them the finger, yeah man" thanks big poet
Anonymous
5th Mar 2019 1:53pm
Yes. This is it. Exactly
5th Mar 2019 2:48pm
5th Mar 2019 9:19pm
You have a gift for understatement: "just another day inside." You portray the poet's life to perfection. This contains psychological and emotional strength in your depiction of how we write, or try to. You succeed, and brilliantly.
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
6th Mar 2019 00:43am
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