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Hakiu
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Hakiu
who would have thought it
five seven five would be so
hard to do... haiku
Written by
jenjames
Published
2nd Mar 2019
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sometimes you have to start from the beginning
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#haiku
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Re. Hakiu
snugglebuck
2nd Mar 2019 6:56pm
From a pot boiling with frustration bubbles a witt of creation.
Loved this sweet littyle write.
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Re. Hakiu
Ahavati
(Tams)
3rd Mar 2019 00:05am
Yes!
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Re. Hakiu
Hunterapsych
(Shaman among machines)
3rd Mar 2019 00:36am
Excellent!👏👏 i dig!
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Naajir
5th Mar 2019 5:00pm
ha...diggin the cleverness
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