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celestial music
gentle is the day that blink open her eyes
sore from war soaking in the celestial magic
prepared for one and all seeking comfort
in strange days like these nothing is certain
ever-shifting rays a blip on the screen
then just like that...with a sigh gone
a moment is all we have
in the ochre-colored dawn
entwined soul kisses then depart
protective of one another
we seek to unite under the sleeping giant
cold was the day who found us
bitter and jealous
no anger will touch us here in the aether
we are sublimely in tune
making music all our own
a lullaby of the damned
clear of the heavy-handed judgment
over this atmosphere
twirling in the energy
sipping kinetically
imprinting on whom we choose
graceful is the day who first saw us...free
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Re. celestial music
2nd Mar 2019 2:55pm
a lullaby of the damned
clear of the heavy-handed judgment
over this atmosphere
Love this! Great write
clear of the heavy-handed judgment
over this atmosphere
Love this! Great write
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2nd Mar 2019 2:56pm
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2nd Mar 2019 3:21pm
thank you dearest DC for such a beautiful comment I'm happy you felt the music...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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2nd Mar 2019 3:22pm
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2nd Mar 2019 4:05pm
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2nd Mar 2019 4:40pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for the wonderful music and beautiful comment... here's what I was listening to while writing this if you want to have a listen 😊
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Or12UEx8fHY
love Brenda 🌹
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Or12UEx8fHY
love Brenda 🌹
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2nd Mar 2019 5:00pm
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2nd Mar 2019 6:38pm
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2nd Mar 2019 9:13pm
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3rd Mar 2019 12:19pm
thank you graciously dearest, Lawrence...I deeply appreciate your presence on my pages...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. celestial music
2nd Mar 2019 11:14pm
I can see how music inspires you, Lady Brenda. It could be celestial music, or a lullaby of the damned. The end result is always great poetry. Wonderful work!
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3rd Mar 2019 12:20pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for the love on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
2nd Mar 2019 11:49pm
Brenda.. this is beauty and power.. so dig your work... love you..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. celestial music
3rd Mar 2019 12:21pm
thank you graciously dearest Dave my brother so happy to see you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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3rd Mar 2019 00:41am
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3rd Mar 2019 12:22pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re. celestial music
This is so damn beautiful, love. You have me ever yearning for a glimpse into your celestial heaven.
You probably know my love of lullabies in my writing so you had me going on those of the damned. I love that reference.
Your last three stanzas had me smiling as I envision you whirling & twirling in happiness , protective of & free with all who you love..all that is "you." I really liked that this one also reflects to me, an inner peace stirring inside you & I like that..if not, I so wish it!! I have faith in you & see promises beyond where you're at girlie.
💕your way!!
Also that song..sigh..one of my favorite groups and it stirred up a memory of someone. I love it & needed to hear it since I have a love for painful nostalgia. Lol..its a love hate thing
You probably know my love of lullabies in my writing so you had me going on those of the damned. I love that reference.
Your last three stanzas had me smiling as I envision you whirling & twirling in happiness , protective of & free with all who you love..all that is "you." I really liked that this one also reflects to me, an inner peace stirring inside you & I like that..if not, I so wish it!! I have faith in you & see promises beyond where you're at girlie.
💕your way!!
Also that song..sigh..one of my favorite groups and it stirred up a memory of someone. I love it & needed to hear it since I have a love for painful nostalgia. Lol..its a love hate thing
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Re: Re. celestial music
3rd Mar 2019 12:31pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora for your beautiful thoughts and love on this write... you have me positively beaming today and that is saying something I'm a little sad today...
I deeply appreciate you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
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3rd Mar 2019 2:21pm
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3rd Mar 2019 12:25pm
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3rd Mar 2019 12:27pm
thank you beautiful one I love the feeling that inspired this... I'm going to try and hold onto it today... I absolutely adore your vision of this write you made me smile...
I love you...
Brenda 🌹💕🌹💕
I love you...
Brenda 🌹💕🌹💕