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Saffron Days
: minstrels of words
( a sapphic poem )
Love of spoken verse by our Sappho’s passion,
shared between my good friend Orpheus and I,
would have us, as a rule, the dueling poets
Till day turned saffron.
Two young buskers head-strong: wine, women & song
among the common folk we’d trod, to peddle
and spread the verse of stories & morals sung,
eyeing pretty girls.
Most were glad to hear from us, as we two walked,
down the dusty roads we’d wander, singing, like
troubadours, through villages and fields, leaf-strewn,
of parchment and mist.
Those days of sandal-wandering were famous
not only with the gathered souls in town, but
farmers pushing carts & shepherds with their sheep,
with whom we would sleep.
( a sapphic poem )
Love of spoken verse by our Sappho’s passion,
shared between my good friend Orpheus and I,
would have us, as a rule, the dueling poets
Till day turned saffron.
Two young buskers head-strong: wine, women & song
among the common folk we’d trod, to peddle
and spread the verse of stories & morals sung,
eyeing pretty girls.
Most were glad to hear from us, as we two walked,
down the dusty roads we’d wander, singing, like
troubadours, through villages and fields, leaf-strewn,
of parchment and mist.
Those days of sandal-wandering were famous
not only with the gathered souls in town, but
farmers pushing carts & shepherds with their sheep,
with whom we would sleep.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 26th Feb 2019
Author's Note
•This has a syllabic line count per quatrain stanza of 11/11/11/5.
•Entered in the Deep competition
“Sapphics 1”, hosted by
AnonymousBystander.
•Entered in the Deep competition
“Sapphics 1”, hosted by
AnonymousBystander.
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26th Feb 2019 8:52pm
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26th Feb 2019 9:05pm
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26th Feb 2019 9:08pm
I seem to be the child who could not stand coloring outside the lines to the adult that doesnt see a need for them in most things anymore ... With that lengthy qualification ... there is an appealing symmetry in this ... Bless and love ...
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26th Feb 2019 11:21pm
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26th Feb 2019 11:29pm
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 00:17am
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She cuts a most amazing muse,
Both in striped tie & tux.
As Tigress stands to take her cues,
Baton raised high, then ducks!
Aah there you are, my Sky sister! Thank you for the glorious shoutout!
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Both in striped tie & tux.
As Tigress stands to take her cues,
Baton raised high, then ducks!
Aah there you are, my Sky sister! Thank you for the glorious shoutout!
🐾💌
Re. Saffron Days
Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 1:06am
Hi Jadey,
Wonderful writing! Good luck in the competition!
Matthew.
Wonderful writing! Good luck in the competition!
Matthew.
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Thank you, Puppy, I’m glad you like it. Did you see the one published before this ( you’ve liked my story verses ), just curious.
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 2:59am
Hi Jadey,
No, I did not, but will be sure to check it out. What's the name?
Pup.
No, I did not, but will be sure to check it out. What's the name?
Pup.
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27th Feb 2019 5:40am
I think new posts get pushed off the first page pretty fast, depending how many members one follows.
It’s the one I published before this one, and it’s entitled “The Masses Thought Them Gods”.
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It’s the one I published before this one, and it’s entitled “The Masses Thought Them Gods”.
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 6:09am
Awesome. Thank you so much, Jadey. I'll definitely check that out.
I miss you.
Puppet.
I miss you.
Puppet.
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27th Feb 2019 9:26am
Aw Puppy, you see me, I’m here just about everyday. And your not “Puppet”.
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 4:20pm
Hi Jadey,
It was originally Pupper, but that damn spell check changes everything(except for the words I actually spell wrong. lol).
Thanks,
Matthew.
It was originally Pupper, but that damn spell check changes everything(except for the words I actually spell wrong. lol).
Thanks,
Matthew.
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27th Feb 2019 4:32pm
lol, mine does the same to me sometimes...
I had a dog as a little girl, I named her ‘Pepper’... wonder what made me think of that?
I had a dog as a little girl, I named her ‘Pepper’... wonder what made me think of that?
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 5:08pm
Probably because you're loopy. Kidding.
Thanks Jadey.
Matthew.
Thanks Jadey.
Matthew.
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Anonymous
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27th Feb 2019 7:57am
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27th Feb 2019 9:34am
Aww my darling feline sister, what a beautiful read you’ve given, it’s perfection! As you described, is how it felt & sounded to me as I wrote it. I can’t thank you enough.
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