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...you... (in the key of Jimi)
I Pledge Allegiance
to this dread
wrapping my lips around
his third leg
As he masterfully strums this
Voodoo Child
Keeping me within his
Purple Haze
Slashing and plucking
my base
As I
Testify
Screaming out to an old
Isle Brother’s track
Strobe lights adding to the trip
flashes of us intertwined
Making my last
Wind Cry Mary
Gyrating seductively
Becoming your
Little Miss Strange
Ready to be
objectified
Longing to subjected to
Your pain
Can wait for those
Long Hot Summer Nights
Sweat dripping down my back
Your tongue following in its tracks
If 6 was 9
I can’t
Wait Until Tomorrow
To lay with you lazily
Heightened by our intensity
and gaze at our
Castles made in the Sand
to this dread
wrapping my lips around
his third leg
As he masterfully strums this
Voodoo Child
Keeping me within his
Purple Haze
Slashing and plucking
my base
As I
Testify
Screaming out to an old
Isle Brother’s track
Strobe lights adding to the trip
flashes of us intertwined
Making my last
Wind Cry Mary
Gyrating seductively
Becoming your
Little Miss Strange
Ready to be
objectified
Longing to subjected to
Your pain
Can wait for those
Long Hot Summer Nights
Sweat dripping down my back
Your tongue following in its tracks
If 6 was 9
I can’t
Wait Until Tomorrow
To lay with you lazily
Heightened by our intensity
and gaze at our
Castles made in the Sand
Published 25th Feb 2019
| Edited 10th Sep 2019
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25th Feb 2019 4:19am
You are obviously well versed in Hendrix. You managed to weave these tunes quite effectively into the piece. Impressive!
25th Feb 2019 4:26am
I've always enjoyed imaginative writing..and this entry here is off the hook
The depth of meaning and the cadence came together in a harmonious fashion
And that pic is the truth!!
The depth of meaning and the cadence came together in a harmonious fashion
And that pic is the truth!!
25th Feb 2019 6:08am
25th Feb 2019 12:43pm
Awesome piece jenjames! Love this👏
Flows so freely and full of marvelous lines with incredible imagery!
Love the ending
"If 6 was 9
I can’t
Wait Until Tomorrow
To lay with you lazily
Heightened by our intensity
and gaze at our
Castles made in the Sand"
Awesome just awesome
I dig this very much👏👏👏 Hendrix is the shit no doubt one of my hippie heroes
Flows so freely and full of marvelous lines with incredible imagery!
Love the ending
"If 6 was 9
I can’t
Wait Until Tomorrow
To lay with you lazily
Heightened by our intensity
and gaze at our
Castles made in the Sand"
Awesome just awesome
I dig this very much👏👏👏 Hendrix is the shit no doubt one of my hippie heroes
26th Feb 2019 3:47am
