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Evaluated

Something in their history
suggested those little fractures
were starting to effect the highs

I was paying close attention
when she popped him in her mouth

I'd inadvertently stumbled upon them
on the way to the bathroom

under the influence of a few extra drinks
it must have been an oversight
to leave the door slightly ajar

She was seated on the toilet
while he stood, shorts around his ankles

Her striking green eyes caught me
and seemed to invite me to quietly watch

She tried to keep a steady rhythm
but he kept stopping to jerk himself
before returning his semi-erect state
to her impatient mouth

I could read the resentment in her eyes
as she half-heartedly went back to motion

But when she looked at me
sliding back from the shaft
I could see her slow down
injecting a mild effort for my benefit

He stopped again
to pull at it,
but once it became more frequent
he eventually muttered,
"forget it".

I quickly evaded being caught
and watched him stumble off
for another drink

I thought she would follow,
but she sits there
clearly annoyed and unsatisfied

I decide to approach

"Do you mind? I have to go."

"You saw that?" She lifts off the seat and steps to the side.  "Be my guest."

She closes the door behind me
and I pull myself free to begin

"I can see you liked the idea?" she says, startling me.

I'd thought she'd left

She's moved beside me,
eyes directed at my jutting cock

"Can I?"

I allow her to place it in her hand
it feels smooth and her thumb trails across the bulb
which garners a nervous sigh from me

"Now that's how hard it needs to be"

She holds it, considering the weight

"I won't get you into trouble, tonight!"

She plants a kiss on my cheek

"You can think about that.  I won't mind."

Tenderloin
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