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CARNAL DISTRACTION

I am two creatures
joined at the hip�
a carnival attraction

SatInUGal

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 18th Feb 2019

#dirty #MentalHealth #senryu

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Re. CARNAL DISTRACTION

18th Feb 2019 7:22pm

bust out the carnival music....

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Re. CARNAL DISTRACTION

18th Feb 2019 7:22pm

thought provoking senryu

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SatInUGal (Kumar)

18th Feb 2019 7:47pm

Thank you!

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Re. CARNAL DISTRACTION

18th Feb 2019 7:24pm

sounds like a cloned phone

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Re. CARNAL DISTRACTION

18th Feb 2019 9:30pm

A two letter slip between 'carnal' and 'carnival' (as in the malapropism 'carnival knowledge')!

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Re. CARNAL DISTRACTION

18th Feb 2019 11:40pm

"When to become one," it's either love or a two headed angry beast. 👍

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Re. CARNAL DISTRACTION

Hunterapsych (Shaman among machines)

19th Feb 2019 00:57am

I feel ya!

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