deepundergroundpoetry.com
Eternally~beautiful Pandora
gentle is the day that beheld her
glimmering in the garden
glorious daughter of Eden-
your countenance shines
love pure and unadulterated...
rays of light tenderly illuminate
my soul's ache deeply felt
you are divinity in the flesh
all Woman...
so glorious to behold
I caught a glimpse of you for a moment
then you were gone...
when my eyes darkened and glazed
with Words and ill-placed blame
for a deity, I thought betrayed
you bring to my remembrance HIM
His truer passions and desires
tenderly you come
balming my soul
I realize I've been at war
I hear His voice calling me home
sisters, we are...
I shelter in your eternal light
it has been an eternal night for me
with tears of joy I remember...
Romans 8:28
'and we know all things work to the good
to them that love God.
to them that are called according to his purpose'
you reflect his beauty and power
I know his voice well
my innocence remains hidden
deep inside Him
with a gentle grace of your own
you call to me...I'm bidden
inside your sacred halls
you give me succor
from your breast, I am nourished
my soul sighs at its renewal
enters the woman
evolving to suit his needs
your true understanding of Him
is a beautiful revelation to me
my soul weeps within a misunderstanding
my beautiful sister of Lilith and Eve
I love you...eternally
Author's Note
I hope you realize I see you a Goddess in your own right beautiful one... when I say I hear God when you speak it is with a knowing that you have a deeper understanding
of the deity he is than even I do...
sometimes when you write
it feels like the authority of God
I can hear his voice speaking through you...
strange but true...
the poem you wrote me
opened my eyes to some things
it moved my heart deeply
towards you and Him
my soul weeps for your beauty...
thank you 💕❤💕❤
of the deity he is than even I do...
sometimes when you write
it feels like the authority of God
I can hear his voice speaking through you...
strange but true...
the poem you wrote me
opened my eyes to some things
it moved my heart deeply
towards you and Him
my soul weeps for your beauty...
thank you 💕❤💕❤
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 14
reading list entries 3
comments 30
reads 718
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 3:50pm
A truly Blessed write ... the string quartet of gorgeous love truly felt throughout ... Bless and love .. all ...
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 4:07pm
thank you graciously dearest FeNyX there is something so beautiful about this lady...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
Anonymous
18th Feb 2019 3:51pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 4:07pm
thank you graciously beautiful Sky...for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 3:53pm
Beautiful tribute ... as only you can do my poetess ... simply divine ...
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 4:09pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for your beauty and support... I feel the love...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
18th Feb 2019 4:26pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 4:38pm
thank you graciously dearest poet
for the love and deeply beautiful comment
I'm unsure how godly we are though lol
deeply lustful like the deity himself we are...
we give him a run for his money giggles...
love Brenda 💕
for the love and deeply beautiful comment
I'm unsure how godly we are though lol
deeply lustful like the deity himself we are...
we give him a run for his money giggles...
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
18th Feb 2019 4:42pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 4:44pm
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
Anonymous
18th Feb 2019 4:47pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
20th Feb 2019 3:52pm
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 10:48pm
Wonderful work Brenda. The spirituality and love for Pandora prevail. My favorite lines:
'and we know all things work to the good
to them that love God.
to them that are called according to his purpose'
you reflect his beauty and power
I know his voice well
my innocence remains hidden
deep inside Him
To say that I'm moved is putting it mildly. This one shines, and makes my day.
'and we know all things work to the good
to them that love God.
to them that are called according to his purpose'
you reflect his beauty and power
I know his voice well
my innocence remains hidden
deep inside Him
To say that I'm moved is putting it mildly. This one shines, and makes my day.
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 10:54pm
this beautiful Woman dearest Thomas sigh she is so beautiful to me... she put together what she sees in me and allowed me to see the beauty she does... I wrote her this to tell her she reminds me of the most beautiful parts of the deity god I don't know somehow her acceptance of my truest feelings let me know he understands too idk why and I could be way off the mark either Pandora is a gorgeous lady to me...
thank you dearest Thomas...
love Brenda 💕
thank you dearest Thomas...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 11:26pm
Wow. I am in tears and speechless myself. I'm all happy inside that I could guide you somehow but I'm just a sinner the same & far from "divine". As I said in the pm, we don't have the greatest bond but every time I've lost my way, He always leads me somewhere to grow. I'm only a believer because I've been humbled through tragedies since I was a child. I don't read my bible or even go to church or try to so much as stray from sin, tbh. I always have it memorized in the back of my mind,
" Those who weep with tears shall sow with joy" so out of suffering comes blessings. I see a lot of my pain in you & I've even tried to justify he didn t even exist & if he did, was an asshole. Then I woke up and realized I was just angry.
I've have had a rough couple of years, been on deaths door & just recently brought myself out of a mess that broke my heart, throwing myself into this place more than before. Reading more from others like you , putting more thought into writing and studying it. I showed up here a disaster and more broken than ever and that was my blessing. All of the love, the beauty of words & the people like you have helped put me back together. Truly. I'm more at peace &more postive than ever. I've been getting my own vibes & just maybe He put us through so much bs & broke us to find a better horizon. ;)
Geez, hope I haven't forgotten anything. I'm truly humbled and blessed to know You, read this & touch you somehow. You called and I answered, beautiful. That's it. 💖💜👭
" Those who weep with tears shall sow with joy" so out of suffering comes blessings. I see a lot of my pain in you & I've even tried to justify he didn t even exist & if he did, was an asshole. Then I woke up and realized I was just angry.
I've have had a rough couple of years, been on deaths door & just recently brought myself out of a mess that broke my heart, throwing myself into this place more than before. Reading more from others like you , putting more thought into writing and studying it. I showed up here a disaster and more broken than ever and that was my blessing. All of the love, the beauty of words & the people like you have helped put me back together. Truly. I'm more at peace &more postive than ever. I've been getting my own vibes & just maybe He put us through so much bs & broke us to find a better horizon. ;)
Geez, hope I haven't forgotten anything. I'm truly humbled and blessed to know You, read this & touch you somehow. You called and I answered, beautiful. That's it. 💖💜👭
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
I'm so happy you liked this beautiful one I was really kind of worried as you know I write quite a bit about being angry at the deity we call God and really I had no substantial proof you had faith in anything higher than you... I went out on a limb though because one thing I noticed or rather felt with your writes is they had authority behind them authority I recognized... we don't have to go to church and I hope this doesn't freak you out but here is a confession the last time I was in a church was about a year ago I was sitting in my seat and was listening to the preacher who was very good looking I might add preach... well anyway I got stimulated right there in my seat...needless to say I felt guilty about it and didn't go back... I really believe there are things about his nature we don't truly understand... you with your precious gift to me today said a lot to me and I don't know exactly why but something in me felt your acceptance of me and you do know me is also his love too... anyway it's very beautiful to me... so that's how this poem came about and as you know it is not a normal one for me...you are a beautiful Goddess I'm so happy in your own turmoil you found your way here... may we continue to journey together and have our minds enlightened as to his truest desires and for that matter our own...
love you lady 🌹
Brenda 💕
love you lady 🌹
Brenda 💕
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 11:34pm
I feel like I need to comment a million more times to show you the praise & represent my happiness right now. For you as much as myself. Cheers to a new Brenda. We can do this thing called life, girl!! I still don't feel worthy considering my halo is pretty damn dirty and dusty. Thank you for easing my grief and shame as that's been weighing on me heavy. Really heavy, your words are my blessing!!
"We Are All In The Gutter But Some Of Us Are Looking At The Stars”
– Oscar Wilde
"We Are All In The Gutter But Some Of Us Are Looking At The Stars”
– Oscar Wilde
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 11:45pm
thank you beautiful Pandora for your deep love I'm so happy if this helped ease your grief and pain we need not carry such...I have a feeling you won't be needing that halo either because you are beautiful as you are...
I love the Oscar Wilde quote 💕
hugs beautiful one 🌹
I love the Oscar Wilde quote 💕
hugs beautiful one 🌹
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 00:04am
Too funny. Marilyn grew up loving God & church so much she wanted to dance naked in the service although she didn't. Lol. I actually don't believe we need them, Jesus preached at the river.;)
0
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
Anonymous
18th Feb 2019 11:35pm
Crimmy,
That was beautiful, my friend! Isn't she just one of the nicest people ever? She's so sweet and warm.
Thank you for recognizing her beauty with your wonderful poetry.
Love,
Matthew.
That was beautiful, my friend! Isn't she just one of the nicest people ever? She's so sweet and warm.
Thank you for recognizing her beauty with your wonderful poetry.
Love,
Matthew.
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 1:09am
thank you graciously dearest Matthew she really is truly beautiful...she touches my heart deeply...
as you do yourself do beautiful soul...
love Brenda💕
as you do yourself do beautiful soul...
love Brenda💕
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
Anonymous
19th Feb 2019 3:08am
Thank you, Sweet girl. You girls here are wonderful.
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.
1
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
18th Feb 2019 11:56pm
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 1:10am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jun 2024 1:45am
19th Feb 2019 00:03am
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 1:13am
thank you graciously dearest Chis for feeling my versatility this being very different for me but I was deeply inspired by beautiful Pandora...
I haven't really tried to get published yet I don't know I know I need to,,,,
I deeply appreciate your belief in me...
love Brenda 💕
I haven't really tried to get published yet I don't know I know I need to,,,,
I deeply appreciate your belief in me...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
Anonymous
19th Feb 2019 1:07am
Hey Crim.......outstanding tribute........can feel the words straight from your heart and soul........pure grace and beauty within you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 1:15am
thank you graciously beautiful Flower for the love on this write Pandora is such a gorgeous lady this is in response to an awe-inspiring write she did for me today...
I cherish you beautiful one...
love Brenda 🌹
I cherish you beautiful one...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 1:46am
Another lovely tribute to one of the DUP's finest voices. Lovely, Brenda.
1
Re: Re. Eternally~beautiful Pandora
19th Feb 2019 1:48am
thank you dearest Tender One I couldn't do what she did for me today letting her see through her eyes my reflection... so I let her know how she moved me with her beauty...
I cherish your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
I cherish your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹