Baptism

Loved it

Glad you could enjoy this write. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

very intense read dearest DC
darkly thrilling...

love Brenda ❤

Thanks Crim. This was a older co-write but I decided to use my lines and make a separate poem out of it.

Much appreciated.

Please and thank you

And thank you for reading.

hey there DC I had to add this to my list
I couldn't admit how much I really liked it earlier ❤

You deserve many hugs today, friend 🤗🤗🤗. Thanks for being awesome.

hugs you dearest DC this just gets me in all the right places so primal ❤

Epic, N. Absolutely amazing. I am blown away.  I'm ashamed of not seeing this sooner!! How did this gorgeous sexy af write slip through my feeds? Holy fuck is the right response, I'd think;) I loved seeing this side of you too... A lot. Isn't it hot as hell to write about sex as a religious act?!. My favorite stanza by far...
" you have become reincarnated 
arising as a holy fucker 
I couldn’t be more proud"

Perhaps I should turn the tables and write from the other side.🤔😇

I always love seeing your comments. Puts a smile on my face. I have many sides to me; all of which are much more interesting than the real thing lol.

I look forward to seeing your darker side one day 😈

Yay. I'm glad to know that. I get that, I've told people before to calm down, it's a mere fairytale, not my life. Lol

We'll see what I come up with. It probably won't touch this sizzling write & I've gotten out of vulgar words for the most part. I know, boring old sensual suzie.🙄 Haha.. I think you & I could be good collab material for some reason too. Let me know.☺

This one was damn good stuff. Mmm

Lol. I have that problem too of people thinking everything is my life. Sometimes it’s fantasy, sometimes over exaggeration, and sometimes it’s just me. Guess overall if you want to know the person behind the poem, you should just talk to them.

Your writing is beauty; no need to change that. I simply write as my heart tells me, and my heart is blacken with vulgarness lol. We can collaborate. I haven’t done one in awhile but I wouldn’t mind. If you want hit up my inbox and let me know some ideas.

"boldly thrusting into your core
you’re bent over the bathtub
dunking you in like baptism"

you had me with this fucking hot opening
a man who takes control is fucking sexy...

you never fail to amaze me DC...

love Brenda ❤

I have my days haha. Though I just write. There's people here that are beyond anything I could ever reach.

you have a power all your own...

I really enjoyed this. Wonderful write.

Thanks CasketSharpe. Always a pleasure to see you reading my work.