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Anal Cabal
Prince Nala lie back
on an abaca hammock
enjoying fresh bacca
and masala under a gossamer
cabana aside the Ganges River—
natural light seeping
through its beautiful weave—
acacia-branched shadows
moving as smoke atop the fabric.
As servants tended blains
upon the soles of his feet,
he supped while contemplating
penning an alcaic verse
for his Princess Damayanti
( having been chosen
as her wedded husband
so many years ago ).
He gazed intently beyond
two binal banian trees
withered of their figs
for inspiration; his kingdom,
Nishadha had been blanched
by a cruel drought—
its greenery clinching to root;
canna gasping for life in cracked
bulbs cinched by death;
the laich-lands were becoming
no more than sand and clachs.
He thought of his family instead—
Damayanti, how their union
had been blessed by Gods
under a courtyard lanai
blanketed in liana for shade—
her chin cupped in his hand. . .
their two children now beacons.
And the one mistake that allowed
Kali’s malfic possession to sweep
him away in drunken merriment
and casting of the die—
stripped of all he possessed
for a season—abandoned family
lain with shame, destitution
was an inch from fateful destiny.
The fight was righteous
his restoration glorious!
The land was recovering;
fate blessed him with fruits
of peace and happiness—
O! Alas, Kali! Your anal
cabal suffered annialism;
the abaci calculations
allotted you but seconds
on the scale of infinity—
and what was taken
was returned tenfold.
As a reminder to the perils
of bacchanalianism and gambling
it is recorded still in the annal
of 12th century text, Nishadha Charita,
in the Sanskrit literature of Mahabharata.
All Praise be to Allah!
Prince Nala dipped quill in ink—
then smiled.
~
on an abaca hammock
enjoying fresh bacca
and masala under a gossamer
cabana aside the Ganges River—
natural light seeping
through its beautiful weave—
acacia-branched shadows
moving as smoke atop the fabric.
As servants tended blains
upon the soles of his feet,
he supped while contemplating
penning an alcaic verse
for his Princess Damayanti
( having been chosen
as her wedded husband
so many years ago ).
He gazed intently beyond
two binal banian trees
withered of their figs
for inspiration; his kingdom,
Nishadha had been blanched
by a cruel drought—
its greenery clinching to root;
canna gasping for life in cracked
bulbs cinched by death;
the laich-lands were becoming
no more than sand and clachs.
He thought of his family instead—
Damayanti, how their union
had been blessed by Gods
under a courtyard lanai
blanketed in liana for shade—
her chin cupped in his hand. . .
their two children now beacons.
And the one mistake that allowed
Kali’s malfic possession to sweep
him away in drunken merriment
and casting of the die—
stripped of all he possessed
for a season—abandoned family
lain with shame, destitution
was an inch from fateful destiny.
The fight was righteous
his restoration glorious!
The land was recovering;
fate blessed him with fruits
of peace and happiness—
O! Alas, Kali! Your anal
cabal suffered annialism;
the abaci calculations
allotted you but seconds
on the scale of infinity—
and what was taken
was returned tenfold.
As a reminder to the perils
of bacchanalianism and gambling
it is recorded still in the annal
of 12th century text, Nishadha Charita,
in the Sanskrit literature of Mahabharata.
All Praise be to Allah!
Prince Nala dipped quill in ink—
then smiled.
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 18th Feb 2019
Author's Note
For Haley's godforsaken scramblegram comp! All Praise to ALL gods it's over! https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10610/
I chose Bacchanalianism as my word, and used 31 words within the word.
I chose Bacchanalianism as my word, and used 31 words within the word.
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Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 00:24am
Sage!!...
*faints from overwhelming AWE before she can continue her chant of praise!...*
*faints from overwhelming AWE before she can continue her chant of praise!...*
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 00:32am
Re. Anal Cabal
Anonymous
18th Feb 2019 00:39am
I'm going to need plastic surgery to repair the cracks in my cheeks from holding back the laughter. 😀📝
But seriously, it was quite the education. Now I want to read up on the inspiration behind it.
💜💏💋
But seriously, it was quite the education. Now I want to read up on the inspiration behind it.
💜💏💋
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 00:43am
Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 1:41am
oh you snatched me with I this!! i was confused trying to see the pattern or what the point was! Honey!!! this was truly AMAZING! I don't even know why i am so stunned, cause i should have known! I need to start looking at these challenges! This looks like it was so much fun! i had to go back and re read once I knew what you were doing and how clever are you? * geesh* I definitely will be trying this myself! where do i find the rules? are there rules to this? please forgive the ramble but this is exciting!
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I'm going to be honest, Jen! This thing will kick. your. ass! However, the feeling of accomplishment once you've completed it is a typical writer's high ( and you know what I mean )! The link to the comp is in the notes! Just click it and it'll take you right to the comp!
I can't wait to read your entry, and am happy you enjoyed this one!
I can't wait to read your entry, and am happy you enjoyed this one!
Re: Re. Anal Cabal
20th Feb 2019 11:43am
Jen - please join!!! i will be thrilled to see your take on this challengeeeee.
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Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 3:45am
Beautifully done a clever way of playing with words to weave a funtastic story. I'm taking the challenge myself.:-)
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 11:31am
Thanks, Summerain!
It changed direction four times on me, leading me to a story I'd never even heard of, much less read! Love when poetry leads!
It changed direction four times on me, leading me to a story I'd never even heard of, much less read! Love when poetry leads!
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
18th Feb 2019 1:36pm
Re. Anal Cabal
19th Feb 2019 7:18pm
Re: Re. Anal Cabal
Hahaha!
I was so exhausted after this challenge I was delirious! We laughed for 30 min straight on anal cabal!
I was so exhausted after this challenge I was delirious! We laughed for 30 min straight on anal cabal!
Re. Anal Cabal
oh my freaking word, i have definitely composed one of these
before from an previous site which was years before i came here!
what the! lol yes you rocked the hell out this, my love you know
ive no more words for you, so i stay silent in enjoyment
because now its been years since arriving here
and you never let my mind cease in wandering who you
are and what it would be like in your company. Admired
<3
before from an previous site which was years before i came here!
what the! lol yes you rocked the hell out this, my love you know
ive no more words for you, so i stay silent in enjoyment
because now its been years since arriving here
and you never let my mind cease in wandering who you
are and what it would be like in your company. Admired
<3
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
20th Feb 2019 11:54am
Thank you, Noire!
I truly appreciate that. This gave me a run for my time; that's for certain!
I truly appreciate that. This gave me a run for my time; that's for certain!
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20th Feb 2019 4:51pm
Re. Anal Cabal
20th Feb 2019 9:15pm
Oh WOW! Such a wonderful complexity of words...I love it. Enjoyed you connecting Kali with Dionysus, the Greek god of wine and sexual ecstasy together in the "bacchanalianism"...very clever indeed A.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
20th Feb 2019 9:18pm
Ha! You got that! I didn't think anyone would!
Thanks, my friend. And for the RL!
Thanks, my friend. And for the RL!
Re: Re. Anal Cabal
20th Feb 2019 9:23pm
Re. Anal Cabal
21st Feb 2019 3:10pm
WOW... sooooo powerful, n for me...truly epic in vivid imagery, n’ language !
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Re. Anal Cabal
21st Feb 2019 9:56pm
aw..the stretched extremeties & that which is stretched challenging imaginations ..or that's impossibly stretched ;) literally & in the references. quite flexing the pen...though could correlate to tthe essence of story & characterizattions, the scrambled words & its fitment seems inventive. btw to add some tidbits the leads are so popular in common culture till today ...known as their fused name NalaDamayanthi-reflects their intimacy as couple & yes of course even today-many food outlets are in name of Nala- such was his culinary skill. & Did I read that penultimate verse right? rubbing my eyes here;) justme. will try myself on the other word option in comp. if time's not up for that. Best for you dear x:)
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Re: Re. Anal Cabal
22nd Feb 2019 11:06am
I wanted to work his culinary skills in somehow ( as well as his equine ), but there didn't seem a place for it.
Thank you, my friend. ❤😊
Thank you, my friend. ❤😊
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LOL! Thank you, Snuggle! It was one of the most difficult challenges I have EVER taken! It was also a lot of fun! I miss Haley cracking the whip!