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truthfully
I love you in the rain
under the turquoise skies
in your blue times
even within sin
the dark can't confound
what is plain to see
my heart is breaking
inside me is a piece of you
and I in you abide
see my face without guile
I can't lie to you
blues weep for today
in my heart,
I have hope for tomorrows
where I am free
to be more than a point of contention
with a torn soul
I speak from brokenness
most mortals can't comprehend
in you, I found one who did
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17th Feb 2019 4:17pm
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17th Feb 2019 4:20pm
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17th Feb 2019 4:21pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen for such a deeply moving comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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17th Feb 2019 4:24pm
Re. truthfully
17th Feb 2019 4:28pm
love. expressed.
intense is how i found/felt this one dear Brenda!
beautiful.
job.
intense is how i found/felt this one dear Brenda!
beautiful.
job.
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17th Feb 2019 4:31pm
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17th Feb 2019 4:38pm
I definitely got goosebumps from the last two stanzas, so much that I think they deserve there own poem. Where there is more space for you delve into those concepts and take them to an even deeper space. This has my wheels turning. Love it.
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Re: Re. truthfully
17th Feb 2019 4:41pm
thank you dearest poet you have a good eye yes more needs to be said there because I am speaking on an immortal love where we are finally free to be...
I'm so happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
I'm so happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2019 5:49pm
Oh, beautiful Brenda this was deeply felt. Your soul is so lovely!🤗❣🤗
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17th Feb 2019 9:39pm
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17th Feb 2019 6:28pm
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17th Feb 2019 9:36pm
Rare is it for one to find such beauty defined in words. Beautiful ink Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. truthfully
17th Feb 2019 9:41pm
thank you graciously dearest Harry you really touched my heart...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. truthfully
17th Feb 2019 11:53pm
Beautifully penned piece Brenda👏👏
Such gorgeous depth in your soul baring spills love this!👏👏
Such gorgeous depth in your soul baring spills love this!👏👏
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Re: Re. truthfully
19th Feb 2019 1:56am
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for the love on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. truthfully
18th Feb 2019 2:24am
More superb work, Brenda. This one moved me deeply, and I've read it a few times, and probably will a few more. It captures my heart, truthfully.
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Re: Re. truthfully
19th Feb 2019 1:57am
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for feeling this so deeply...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. truthfully
18th Feb 2019 3:48am
Sensitive Suzie read it a couple times over. Sigh. Such bittersweet emotions, lovely one. I love this one .💖
Fierce new avi too;)
Fierce new avi too;)
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Re: Re. truthfully
19th Feb 2019 1:58am
thank you beautiful Pandora for the love on this vulnerable write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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18th Feb 2019 7:33am
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20th Feb 2019 4:40pm
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20th Feb 2019 6:06pm
I like your new profile pic. I'll have to come up with a new one sometime too.
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20th Feb 2019 6:39pm