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Waves
The magnitude of the moment
reverberates
the moon watches
envious of the motion
the push
the pull
the schrill
succumbing to another's will
bent over at the breakers
a rythmic rush of wave
overcome and blushed
crashing in
again and again
rising to each thrust of the tide
the moans of freedom erupt
falling mute to the depths
of her sea
reverberates
the moon watches
envious of the motion
the push
the pull
the schrill
succumbing to another's will
bent over at the breakers
a rythmic rush of wave
overcome and blushed
crashing in
again and again
rising to each thrust of the tide
the moans of freedom erupt
falling mute to the depths
of her sea
Published 15th Feb 2019
| Edited 16th Feb 2019
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15th Feb 2019 11:02pm
19th Feb 2019 3:25am
15th Feb 2019 11:14pm
Great penning!
Love the ending lines Especially
"rising to each thrust of the tide
the moans of freedom erupt
falling deep into the depths
of her sea"
Spectacular👏👏
Love the ending lines Especially
"rising to each thrust of the tide
the moans of freedom erupt
falling deep into the depths
of her sea"
Spectacular👏👏
19th Feb 2019 3:25am
16th Feb 2019 1:30am
"The moans of freedom erupt." Love your wording here and through the entire poem, JusTim. Wonderful work!
19th Feb 2019 3:26am
17th Feb 2019 9:29pm
Added to my reading list...sweet...powerful...and oh so elegant Tim.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
19th Feb 2019 3:26am
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