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House Full Of Whispers
House full of whispers
Whispers that make you think twice
Twice before saying you're alone
Alone with the voices
Voices that will forever haunt
Haunt the family inside
House full of whispers
Whispers of days past
Past anger and lies and pain
Pain both physically and mentally
Mentally unstable and broken
Broken into thousands of pieces
Whispers that make you think twice
Twice before saying you're alone
Alone with the voices
Voices that will forever haunt
Haunt the family inside
House full of whispers
Whispers of days past
Past anger and lies and pain
Pain both physically and mentally
Mentally unstable and broken
Broken into thousands of pieces
Published 14th Feb 2019
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14th Feb 2019 6:04am
14th Feb 2019 1:20pm
Interesting piece really dig this!👏👏
Love the opening lines
"House full of whispers
Whispers that make you think twice
Twice before saying you're alone"
very nice! Excellent write👏
Love the opening lines
"House full of whispers
Whispers that make you think twice
Twice before saying you're alone"
very nice! Excellent write👏
14th Feb 2019 4:00pm
15th Feb 2019 7:26am
Hmm... this is really creative and expressive. At first I thought it was about a haunted house, but I think I'm grasping the deeper meaning here? "Ghosts of the past" that haunt your memories...
Anyway, I really liked the poem, although it's a little sad.
Anyway, I really liked the poem, although it's a little sad.
15th Feb 2019 7:27am
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- Edited 12th Apr 2020 8:45pm
1st Mar 2019 6:40pm
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1st Mar 2019 8:22pm
