This is actually really powerful in its brevity. I’ve read this several times now and feel like I get something slightly different from it each time. Leaves me pondering and that’s always a good sign of a poem worth reading.
Thanks for the reply Missy, really appreciated it ! If you would ever like to check out my debut poetry collection you can download a digital copy from amazon, or on kindle called "Faded" by Clint Avery. It was 10 years in the making of I believe 144 pieces of my best work. It was quite the accomplishment to finally self publish all those years of writing :) Thanks again for taking the time to read my work. Cheers!