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HAIKU-BLISSFULL VALENTINE
One flower desired
open petals meet stiff stem
inhale fragrant love
open petals meet stiff stem
inhale fragrant love
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 12th Feb 2019
| Edited 13th Feb 2019
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Re. HAIKU-BLISSFULL VALENTINE
12th Feb 2019 11:04pm
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12th Feb 2019 11:40pm
Thank you so much, Pandora! Longest lasting, most heavenly scented flower 😊❤
Re. HAIKU-BLISSFULL VALENTINE
13th Feb 2019 6:51am
Shouldn't the second word of the middle line be PETALS? I understand that it is, as it easily brings to mind the penetrating moment when she has been wowed by the flower from her lover.
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Re: Re. HAIKU-BLISSFULL VALENTINE
13th Feb 2019 4:18pm
Right you are! We're not on a bike ride here 😁 Thank you, sir, fir making me a better writer.
I always appreciate your comments.
I always appreciate your comments.
Re. HAIKU-BLISSFULL VALENTINE
13th Feb 2019 4:27pm
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13th Feb 2019 7:39pm
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14th Feb 2019 00:06am
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14th Feb 2019 1:22am
Thank you, Sir Thomas Crow 😁 It is a style I've enjoyed since childhood. Maybe it's the Japanese connection but there somdthing very peaceful about the form.
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19th Feb 2019 10:02pm
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20th Feb 2019 3:45am
Thank you so much, Soledad! ❤🙏 I like the challenge of writing in this form.
Re. HAIKU-BLISSFULL VALENTINE
25th Feb 2019 8:38pm
I'm never going to look at my hibiscus the same. that darn hussy...
... G, this was gorgeous, so much tension & sensuality compressed here.
love it
x
... G, this was gorgeous, so much tension & sensuality compressed here.
love it
x
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25th Feb 2019 10:35pm
Damn it's nice to see your name 😁 I've missed you. Thank you for the read it pour la commentaire fantastique. I am glad you have a new, perhaps titillating, floral perspective. 🙏💘💋