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the cursed obsessionist
timidly sinking unpublished irises
of her unventured stigmatic eyelands
hapless, in a finale struggle
to at least partially breathe & bloom out
of its frothily bogging in screamless torns
in steepening circumference
doomed in her own terms
of unspelt & unheard of
rigorous imprisonments
in her imperviously veiled
bundling black purdah, her self
cannibalistic painted kohl eyes
fragmented dreams and memories
striped black & white in disjointed bits
crackdown in a pressing recurrence
clumsily compressing furthermore
its shrivelling existence in flashed
rapidity of running contradictions
once a budding keen observant
an unstoppably overenthusiastic
stringent idealist of its practisced
ritualistic- a freedom danceform
in the lushly fertilty of wooden thickety
abundance of geosmine rainforests
- her veins of iridescence bled
passion, pinkly naked nictitating
throbs invited His thunderously
outpouring compelling presence
her unconditionally opened
up surface zone vulnerabilities
in blindly overdosed extremeties
a maddening anorexic thinning expanse
of a nacreously bubbled blown heaven
a glassy membrane floating endangered
with His tucked in colour soul
under lethally zoomed
watchdog visions
the colours
of his deviantly tamed weird musk
craves back to its syntheic laboratories
cultured anaerobic in voluptuously
whorish plastic opacities of urban
dumpyards, sabotages a secretive
alienation over her transparencies
in suicidal evasive bursts, a grandeur
nowhere of Him & Her
Published 11th Feb 2019
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"her unconditionally opened
up surface zone vulnerabilities
in blindly overdosed extremeties
a maddening anorexic thinning expanse
of a nacreously bubbled blown heaven"
your phrasing is delicious...
bravo poetess
Jeff
up surface zone vulnerabilities
in blindly overdosed extremeties
a maddening anorexic thinning expanse
of a nacreously bubbled blown heaven"
your phrasing is delicious...
bravo poetess
Jeff
11th Feb 2019 9:25pm
"- her veins of iridescence bled
passion, pinkly naked nictitating
throbs invited His thunderously
outpouring compelling presence"
the whole poem speaks to me deeply...
love Brenda ❤
passion, pinkly naked nictitating
throbs invited His thunderously
outpouring compelling presence"
the whole poem speaks to me deeply...
love Brenda ❤
11th Feb 2019 9:33pm
16th Feb 2019 7:21pm
This speaks to me perhaps of the depths of self exposed in a longing and love in discovery of another. Vulnerability, hope, desire. It aches with energetic depths. Really astounding to contemplate on the whole Uma.
