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Re. Motionless
10th Feb 2019 00:13am
I'm really feeling this one beautiful...
we all worry about fate I think to some extent...
great write...
love you...
Brenda 🌹💕🌹
we all worry about fate I think to some extent...
great write...
love you...
Brenda 🌹💕🌹
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Re: Re. Motionless
24th Feb 2019 4:31pm
Yes it is haunting me ... It’s the reflecting that’s killing me more than anything...
I just marvel at how much time we waste chasing dreams when what we have now is so
Much better ...
loves you too Crim
Jackie xoxox
I just marvel at how much time we waste chasing dreams when what we have now is so
Much better ...
loves you too Crim
Jackie xoxox
Re. Motionless
10th Feb 2019 00:24am
Re: Re. Motionless
24th Feb 2019 4:34pm
I’ve missed you to Thomas ...
I may go away but never forever..
Loves you
Jackie xo
I may go away but never forever..
Loves you
Jackie xo
Re. Motionless
12th Feb 2019 9:28pm
Eloquent and melancholic, with a powerful, concisely expressed message!
It's very true... We must all come to terms that we will die, whether now or later. I enjoyed this, Zazzles... !
It's very true... We must all come to terms that we will die, whether now or later. I enjoyed this, Zazzles... !
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Re: Re. Motionless
24th Feb 2019 4:35pm
It’s just aweful ...
Nice to see you NB hope it’s not keeping you up at nigh lol Eeek!
Hugsss
Zazzles xx
Nice to see you NB hope it’s not keeping you up at nigh lol Eeek!
Hugsss
Zazzles xx
Re. Motionless
13th Feb 2019 3:24pm
Hey Zazz, I think we're both sitting at the same table, coffee getting cold, waiting for the moment to pass.
I'm just motionless myself lately, breathing moment to moment, can't even put two lines together to weave the tales i'm entangled in.
Good to see you back, there's something so comforting in seeing friends back xo
I'm just motionless myself lately, breathing moment to moment, can't even put two lines together to weave the tales i'm entangled in.
Good to see you back, there's something so comforting in seeing friends back xo
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Re: Re. Motionless
Pounces around Laya my beautiful sister❤️ I have missed you 🌹
Yes I would have to say you are correct!🤐
My coffee is now ice coffee and my brain is caught on the perverbial fence.
I have missed you deeply and am happy to see your writing continues to captivate me,
And sweetheart it does..
I love you as much as any sister could.. your poetry allows us all to get to know you a little better with each stroke you perfect!!!
Jackie xoxo
Ty for the RL bye I am honored xo
Yes I would have to say you are correct!🤐
My coffee is now ice coffee and my brain is caught on the perverbial fence.
I have missed you deeply and am happy to see your writing continues to captivate me,
And sweetheart it does..
I love you as much as any sister could.. your poetry allows us all to get to know you a little better with each stroke you perfect!!!
Jackie xoxo
Ty for the RL bye I am honored xo
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