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Alivia
My little angel born into the wrong hands
How my heart bleeds for your future
But life’s funny sometimes,
I’m sure you’ll make it out alive
you are a special child,
Happy & independent a clever cute
little witch with tons of charm
Sadly your mother doesn’t realize what we see in you, she’s to selfish to notice you
We love and miss you❤️
Just remember we have raised you since before you were two, and your heart remains a part of me an Uncle forever, my little angel Alaivia ....
How my heart bleeds for your future
But life’s funny sometimes,
I’m sure you’ll make it out alive
you are a special child,
Happy & independent a clever cute
little witch with tons of charm
Sadly your mother doesn’t realize what we see in you, she’s to selfish to notice you
We love and miss you❤️
Just remember we have raised you since before you were two, and your heart remains a part of me an Uncle forever, my little angel Alaivia ....
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 24th Feb 2019
| Edited 25th Feb 2019
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Re. Alivia
24th Feb 2019 6:00pm
Told only the way you could
Read it a few times
Kicking ass in a tender way
Like
Read it a few times
Kicking ass in a tender way
Like
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Re: Re. Alivia
Hi Poe,
It’s been a while, I do hope your doing well my dear friend... yes life is unfair most of the time.
If I could I would adopt my great niece,
her mother is a disgrace...
Thank for looking an the list..
I miss you🌹
Love Jackie xo
It’s been a while, I do hope your doing well my dear friend... yes life is unfair most of the time.
If I could I would adopt my great niece,
her mother is a disgrace...
Thank for looking an the list..
I miss you🌹
Love Jackie xo
Re. Alivia
24th Feb 2019 8:26pm
Re: Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 7:48pm
I’m living it nowDaniel, her grandmother is coming today to collect Alvias belongings
BENDITO!!😢😢😢
I am truly going to miss this little Angel❤️
Jackie
BENDITO!!😢😢😢
I am truly going to miss this little Angel❤️
Jackie
Re. Alivia
24th Feb 2019 9:22pm
Exactly the right attention a child deserves...some hardly get and thus affects them as an adult...it takes good souls free with their love to balance another's life in need...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 7:50pm
She is just the best kid ever ! She is so smart and funny and independent ... and she is beautiful
I have had her with us 2 years.. since she was barely 1 1/2 she will be 4 in December ...
Loves ya Jeff
Jackie xo
I have had her with us 2 years.. since she was barely 1 1/2 she will be 4 in December ...
Loves ya Jeff
Jackie xo
Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 00:03am
Sometimes children are caught in adult's war but i believe they will come out of it much stronger.
You can only pray for their well being and be there for them when they come looking for you and they will someday, children never forget xox
You can only pray for their well being and be there for them when they come looking for you and they will someday, children never forget xox
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Re: Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 7:52pm
Well unfortunately it will be a lifelong snare she’ll be in . Her mother is a spoiled selfish brat she only cares about herself and nobody else I don’t even wanna get into it but I’m sure you can imagine. I had to throw her out anymore new new only reason she lasted so long was because we love her daughter so much. My husband is her first uncle and Alivia is his great niece ...
Jackie xx
Jackie xx
Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 00:09am
A genuinely moving poem, Jackie. One detail: In the first line, "angle" should probably be "angel." But I'm nitpicking. Outstanding work from beginning to end.
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Re: Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 7:53pm
Nope your are correct and I always appreciate the corrections Crow :) all fixed :)
Yes it’s horrible but life is unfair...
Loves you and thanks for the visit Thomas❤️
Jackie xo
Yes it’s horrible but life is unfair...
Loves you and thanks for the visit Thomas❤️
Jackie xo
Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 00:23am
She's lucky to have you two that can help if things get to rough for her. Bless her heart
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Re: Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 7:54pm
We could take custody of her we would I’m just trying to get a release for Easter I want to buy her a nice little drive and a big Easter basket I’m gonna do like any egg hunt and color the eggs you know the fun stuff family stuff
Re: Re. Alivia
25th Feb 2019 7:56pm
Yeah well so how we come out the bad guys in all this, but we’re trying to make it so at least we can see here around the holidays, we have big plans for Easter this year aince the girls are old enough to understand more things and and we would love Alivia to be part of it
Hugs
Tim
Jackie xx
Hugs
Tim
Jackie xx
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1st Mar 2019 6:56pm
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