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Contentious me...Unconsciously’
Even though
da naysayers
May come by da pile
thru all this while
MY inter-changeable style
will juss keep runnin’
on n’ on by da mile...
like musical notes
I stroke in n’ out
at every turn
hopin’ to earn,
at least a lil’ smile...
Workin’ this verse guile
perpendicular to this parallel
paralexic nexus of word/s nuance
as it’s coursin’ thru a mental me
Transcendin’
across that ‘global
outta bounds’
chest deep-in
-my-whole...
I’ll strive to prevail,
n’ exhale this
So
True, so
Real
Art form
To
Every
Guy n’ Girl as
You’re bathed
by how my
blood/inked me poetry...
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Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
3rd Feb 2019 4:09pm
Nice flow, and a great use of dialect. I really liked this one, Poetik!
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
3rd Feb 2019 4:53pm
Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
3rd Feb 2019 4:31pm
I'm laughing reading it and watching "da naysayers" passing, mumbling, by...:)
Write on, Poetic!
Write on, Poetic!
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 00:43am
Well since laughter is good for the soul, I say laugh on bro! n thanks a ton :)
Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
3rd Feb 2019 9:49pm
Bruh.....i got flashbacks of the old days reading this....
yeahhhh..you took me there
with this vibe!!!!
yeahhhh..you took me there
with this vibe!!!!
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 00:50am
I hear ya kid, I remember how we had that like mind vibe from the jump... appreciate ur support n the RL add always!
Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
3rd Feb 2019 10:40pm
I truly miss your presence and poetry, PoeticOne. Keep on keep'n on, my friend!
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 1:00am
Aaawww Melting my lil heart lady... :) truly thank you for that n all u are :)
Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 1:03am
hey there Poe I felt this in my soul
and in other places giggles...
this is badass...
love Brenda 🌹
and in other places giggles...
this is badass...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 1:22am
My sweet one, so glad u felt it n truly grateful for the honor of an RL add too! Mmuuaaahhh! :)
Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 11:41am
And then there he was!My black knight riding on his magic stick (pen)~~~
Keep 'em writes flowing!
te extraño tanto!!!
XO!!!
Keep 'em writes flowing!
te extraño tanto!!!
XO!!!
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
4th Feb 2019 3:13pm
My babydoll... missed u much n I gratefully am happy for continued support :)
Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
6th Feb 2019 1:59pm
Wonderful write PD ... bold ... great flow and cadence ... nice mix of line length with killer line breaks ...
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Re: Re. Contentious me...Unconsciously’
7th Feb 2019 2:46am
Always super happy with ur visits n ur very sweet commentary my dear. Thank u! :)