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Crimson Rivulets
My heart is as dark
As this cold, obsidian night
Drowning in its blood
Crimson rivulets
Dripping from the jagged wound
Of my raw pierced heart
Love is the culprit
That brought all this pain inside
Pounding, biting pain
Is it really love?
Or was it I who brought this
Pain upon myself
The night consume me
In its blackness as darkness
Shroud my mind of you
As this cold, obsidian night
Drowning in its blood
Crimson rivulets
Dripping from the jagged wound
Of my raw pierced heart
Love is the culprit
That brought all this pain inside
Pounding, biting pain
Is it really love?
Or was it I who brought this
Pain upon myself
The night consume me
In its blackness as darkness
Shroud my mind of you
Published 2nd Feb 2019
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2nd Feb 2019 3:08pm
Beautifully dark piece Really dig this👏👏
Love the second verse especially
"Crimson rivulets
Dripping from the jagged wound
Of my raw pierced heart"
Deeply intense imagery
love this powerful lil piece
Excellent👏👏
Love the second verse especially
"Crimson rivulets
Dripping from the jagged wound
Of my raw pierced heart"
Deeply intense imagery
love this powerful lil piece
Excellent👏👏
2nd Feb 2019 3:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
6th Feb 2019 7:21pm
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