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HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
Dawn cracks yellow yoke
Sunny side up Hungry waves
Scrambled horizon
gv 2017
Sunny side up Hungry waves
Scrambled horizon
gv 2017
Author's Note
Sunrise at the seashore
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Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
29th Jan 2019 6:16pm
Re: Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
29th Jan 2019 7:49pm
Thank you Mysteria27 for your visit and kind compliment. Occasionally I like imagery in few words as possible. Regards...
Re: Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
29th Jan 2019 7:49pm
Thank you Mysteria27 for your visit and kind compliment. Occasionally I like imagery in few words as possible. Regards...
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Re: Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
29th Jan 2019 7:52pm
Melia, I am glad you liked it, love a sunrise at the shore. Thanks your compliment.....much appreciated
Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
31st Jan 2019 12:29pm
Beautiful, evocative imagery.
So simple and pure.
Sunrise at the sea, one of the most beautiful experiences I am lucky enough to experience.
Thanks for sharing and putting this experience into words.
So simple and pure.
Sunrise at the sea, one of the most beautiful experiences I am lucky enough to experience.
Thanks for sharing and putting this experience into words.
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Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
31st Jan 2019 6:12pm
Colbalt, thanks for the visit and your vey kind & encouraging comments. Yes, a sunrise at the sea enlivens ones soul. I enjoy trying to captures sparse snapshot imagery. Best Regards...
Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
3rd Feb 2019 3:24am
Concise, but brought beautiful imagery to mind. Great job with this one! I really enjoyed it, and I thought the wordplay was really clever :)
Thanks for sharing, Wordhobo!
Thanks for sharing, Wordhobo!
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Re: Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
3rd Feb 2019 11:31am
NB, Thank you for for the visit and generous compliment. Glad you found it meaningful. Very much appreciated. Best Regards...
Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
4th Feb 2019 12:11pm
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5th Feb 2019 00:48am
Re. HAIKU Breakfast At Dawn
30th Apr 2019 9:07pm
Love that Haiku and the simple double-meanings with that twitch of humour in the glory of dawn.
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