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A Love So Strong
A relationship only on a computer
No words ever spoken
Our relationship had love and humor
We were both very outspoken
It took a while for there to be love
We were in love for two years
A love for us to be proud of
We shared all of our fears
We met on-line at the same time
It was always very exciting
Our conversations always sublime
I know I was always smiling
Cyber sex was how we'd play
Our love was off the charts
On-line chatting every day
Our words fine-tuned like art
Even though it had to end
We're always in touch
You'll always be my friend
I could never talk to you too much
Even though you're an ocean away
You're very important to me
I think about you most days
I know you'll also agree
Our relationship was different
But it was very strong
There was always lots of bickering
With you I did belong
Sending you a kiss and hug
I know things now are dark
Years back you were my drug
I loved all your remarks
You're the nicest guy
A diamond in the rough
I'll never say goodbye
I can never get enough
No words ever spoken
Our relationship had love and humor
We were both very outspoken
It took a while for there to be love
We were in love for two years
A love for us to be proud of
We shared all of our fears
We met on-line at the same time
It was always very exciting
Our conversations always sublime
I know I was always smiling
Cyber sex was how we'd play
Our love was off the charts
On-line chatting every day
Our words fine-tuned like art
Even though it had to end
We're always in touch
You'll always be my friend
I could never talk to you too much
Even though you're an ocean away
You're very important to me
I think about you most days
I know you'll also agree
Our relationship was different
But it was very strong
There was always lots of bickering
With you I did belong
Sending you a kiss and hug
I know things now are dark
Years back you were my drug
I loved all your remarks
You're the nicest guy
A diamond in the rough
I'll never say goodbye
I can never get enough
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Re. A Love So Strong
28th Jan 2019 4:55pm
Re. A Love So Strong
28th Jan 2019 5:50pm
Re. A Love So Strong
28th Jan 2019 7:58pm
Very poignant ink of opening your deep feelings to one you loved met on line. Even vast distance did not hold you back. Love imagery and rhythm of this ink. 🌷
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. A Love So Strong
28th Jan 2019 9:36pm
Re. A Love So Strong
28th Jan 2019 9:39pm
Lovely tribute to a love that once was. Particularly like the last two lines:
"I'll never say goodbye
I can never get enough"
Thanks for sharing!
Love, Cobalt
"I'll never say goodbye
I can never get enough"
Thanks for sharing!
Love, Cobalt
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Re: Re. A Love So Strong
28th Jan 2019 9:42pm
Re. A Love So Strong
29th Jan 2019 00:15am
A heart touching write Mysteria27. So relatable. Online romance can get deep and strong.
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29th Jan 2019 00:36am
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29th Jan 2019 1:18am
Re. A Love So Strong
29th Jan 2019 3:48pm
Very beautiful, and well-expressed. I have a good friend who met his love online... They went on to become happily married. Now, with technology, and platforms such as Facebook and skype, this is kind of beautiful connection is possible. We can get to know another from across the world if we wish :)
Thanks for sharing, Mysteria! I enjoyed it!
Thanks for sharing, Mysteria! I enjoyed it!
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Re: Re. A Love So Strong
29th Jan 2019 3:59pm
Thank you so much for your kind comment. It's really amazing how people can connect. You can do a lot of harm in a relationship from the privacy of your home.
xo
xo
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29th Jan 2019 4:03pm
Re: Re. A Love So Strong
29th Jan 2019 4:07pm
If single it's fine but for married people it really is not a good thing....xo
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29th Jan 2019 4:12pm
Re. A Love So Strong
Expressive way to communicate a unique experience. Thank you for sharing it. I've never had anything like it, but I have given up online socializing before to spend more of myself on family. DU is not just any drug, though. It's really building me up in a way that promotes my family relationships and personal goals.
Love having you around, girl!
Edible
Love having you around, girl!
Edible
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Re: Re. A Love So Strong
29th Jan 2019 6:14pm
Thank you for your lovely comment. The internet is interesting for sure...xo