deepundergroundpoetry.com
7 Not so deadly sins
You can never be too close to me
I need you closer, much more than a hug
Cut my veins open them up and pour yourself in
I need you running all thru my body
Fill every need I have
Consume me with your love
Devoir me with your lust
A kindred love is what I need
I will fill every need you have
Commit all 7 sins inside me
Pride: yourself with your skills
Envy: make our love the best
Gluttony: your hunger for my sex
Greed: take everything that I am and share with no one
Sloth: relax and enjoy my soul
I don't think your still close enough
I must have your pulse, your heart, and your thoughts
PLEASE just take me
Let me be yours.
I need you closer, much more than a hug
Cut my veins open them up and pour yourself in
I need you running all thru my body
Fill every need I have
Consume me with your love
Devoir me with your lust
A kindred love is what I need
I will fill every need you have
Commit all 7 sins inside me
Pride: yourself with your skills
Envy: make our love the best
Gluttony: your hunger for my sex
Greed: take everything that I am and share with no one
Sloth: relax and enjoy my soul
I don't think your still close enough
I must have your pulse, your heart, and your thoughts
PLEASE just take me
Let me be yours.
Published 17th Nov 2011
| Edited 3rd Mar 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 2
comments 11
reads 930
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
18th Nov 2011 8:43am
this is so powerful and intense, and amazing. i know this deep rooted, overpowering, murderous need so very, very well. yet i have never come close to being able to put it into words as perfectly and beautifully as you have done here. you expressed my soul, as i never quite could. thank you. and the way you put the 7 deadly sins into it is very cool. this has just become my favorite poem, and it's going to be truly hard for anyone to knock it into second.
18th Nov 2011 10:22am
I'm glad that you grasped what I was after. I had I love once when we would embrace it was never close enough. Atleast on my part. To have a love like that again would tickle my balls pink. Not to be disrespectful. Thank you for enjoying it. I enjoyed feeling it.
22nd Nov 2011 4:29am
22nd Nov 2011 3:26pm
22nd Nov 2011 2:37pm
22nd Nov 2011 3:43pm
love vs lust, they are one in the same.
it drew me in right away like a powerful unseen force--- cool.
it drew me in right away like a powerful unseen force--- cool.
22nd Nov 2011 3:48pm
Love is more related as a need as lust related to a want. Two sides of the same coin. I'm glad that you liked my write. Thank you for the comment.
8th Jan 2012 2:32pm
To need or even want someone this much is an unreal feeling..This is wonderful. Thank you
8th Jan 2012 3:35pm
The need to be fulfilled is to truly live. You know longer have to search for anything else. Except that warm hand when you two are not always together. Thank you for the comment. All4me
8th Jan 2012 6:53pm
