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Enmity
Cupid, kiss my ass;
let me choose my own desires
---- returned your arrow
Author's Note
For the
Valentine's Day Haiku, comp
(my 1st Haiku - here, ever! - lol)
Valentine's Day Haiku, comp
(my 1st Haiku - here, ever! - lol)
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Re: Re. Enmity
25th Jan 2019 7:09pm
Re. Enmity
25th Jan 2019 6:56pm
Re: Re. Enmity
25th Jan 2019 7:09pm
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25th Jan 2019 8:48pm
Re. Enmity
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 10:20pm
Tallen,
Awesome Haiku(gesundheit). I'm normally not a Haiku guy, but you make them fun.
MZ.
Awesome Haiku(gesundheit). I'm normally not a Haiku guy, but you make them fun.
MZ.
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Re: Re. Enmity
25th Jan 2019 11:21pm
You reminded me of a good friend I made while attending UCLA. His name is Hai Chu (pronounced: Hey Choo). I'd always pretend to sneeze when I greeted him. He was good-natured and took it in stride.
& although I am 50% Okinawan and grew up with Haiku literature, I too, haven't dabbled too much in this. I do own a book called Japanese Death Poems and there's a lot of Haikus in it.
I was saving that image for a bitter love poem but thought, " Hey! It's perfect for the Haiku. "
Hence..........
& although I am 50% Okinawan and grew up with Haiku literature, I too, haven't dabbled too much in this. I do own a book called Japanese Death Poems and there's a lot of Haikus in it.
I was saving that image for a bitter love poem but thought, " Hey! It's perfect for the Haiku. "
Hence..........
Re: Re. Enmity
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 11:56pm
Awesome! I have a funny story about that, too. When I was out of High School, I worked at this medical billing place, and there was a doctor named Dr. Kashou. My supervisor, Nancy, always used to bring up the name, and every time I'd say gesundheit, and she'd laugh like crazy. She loved it. lol.
Hey buddy, havce(havce?) a great weekend.
We'll be talking.
MZ.
Hey buddy, havce(havce?) a great weekend.
We'll be talking.
MZ.
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Re: Re. Enmity
26th Jan 2019 00:02am
Did the Doc think it was funny?
You, too
stay warm in work and play
this weekend. Brother
You, too
stay warm in work and play
this weekend. Brother
Re. Enmity
25th Jan 2019 11:24pm
Re: Re. Enmity
25th Jan 2019 11:34pm
If I caused You (and other readers) to chuckle
then my work is done,
here.
thank You for sharing with me and causing me to smile
then my work is done,
here.
thank You for sharing with me and causing me to smile
Anonymous
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26th Jan 2019 11:08pm
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Re: Re. Enmity
26th Jan 2019 11:51pm
Just tryin' to make light of this time of year that has slain so many mortals.
Happy to make You laugh ;)
Happy to make You laugh ;)
Re: Re. Enmity
15th Jan 2020 8:47pm
Poor Cupid??
The Brownie - like lesser god!!
LOL (thanks for causing me to smile & laugh)
The Brownie - like lesser god!!
LOL (thanks for causing me to smile & laugh)
Re: Re. Enmity
4th Feb 2022 00:39am
I don't understand how someone considers someone a lesser god. That primitive thinking really shows whose lesser.
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Re: Re. Enmity
4th Feb 2022 00:43am
Perhaps the thinking resides only in the
GOD / GODDESS
?
i don't have (all) the answers but please, Beautiful Sister,
Keep on sending the questions!!
GOD / GODDESS
?
i don't have (all) the answers but please, Beautiful Sister,
Keep on sending the questions!!
Re. Enmity
4th Feb 2022 2:19am
Brief and to the frigging point. I love the image you added. Very funny.
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Re. Enmity
4th Feb 2022 3:51pm