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Scent
My nostrils flare
as I smell your scent,
unmistakably lust.
The scent,
like a switch,
awakens my cock.
Rising,
it is hungry,
hard,
and its mouth salivates.
With one track focus,
it stalks you.
Until an opening presents.
Like a muscled,
stealthy,
chiseled big cat,
I pounce!
Teeth on your neck,
paws spreading you,
I take your flesh
until my hunger is sedated;
and your lust is quenched.
as I smell your scent,
unmistakably lust.
The scent,
like a switch,
awakens my cock.
Rising,
it is hungry,
hard,
and its mouth salivates.
With one track focus,
it stalks you.
Until an opening presents.
Like a muscled,
stealthy,
chiseled big cat,
I pounce!
Teeth on your neck,
paws spreading you,
I take your flesh
until my hunger is sedated;
and your lust is quenched.
Published 25th Jan 2019
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Basic. Primal
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25th Jan 2019 2:45am
25th Jan 2019 6:20am
25th Jan 2019 6:23am
Likening the pouncing of man on woman like a big cat on its prey. Symbolism easy to understand.
25th Jan 2019 5:10pm
25th Jan 2019 10:17am
25th Jan 2019 5:15pm
SweetO, thanks for reading and reply. Much appreciated, and inspiring that I elicited a sense.
25th Jan 2019 10:25pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 2:14pm
Basic primal..... at it’s best!! Oh to be pray... great ink!
Bravo
Bravo
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 3:06pm
Wildly sexy. Loved it.
18th Feb 2019 7:33pm
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18th Mar 2019 11:35pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
17th Apr 2019 6:05pm
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18th Apr 2019 4:45am
20th Apr 2019 1:25am
Awesome poem and analogy! This write teases the senses and wow!
Rising,
it is hungry,
hard,
and its mouth salivates.
With one track focus,
it stalks you.
Until an opening presents.
S T E A M Y and captivating! Excellent write. ;)
Rising,
it is hungry,
hard,
and its mouth salivates.
With one track focus,
it stalks you.
Until an opening presents.
S T E A M Y and captivating! Excellent write. ;)
20th Apr 2019 7:26pm
Anonymous
29th Mar 2020 9:40pm
That sounds very sexy indeed. Really enjoyable read.
30th Mar 2020 8:14pm
17th May 2021 11:57am
Oh my, I totally love it.. and where that honey trail had lead my wandering poet..🐾🐾
22nd Jun 2021 6:05am
22nd Jun 2021 5:43pm
Et ça fait du bien d’où je le verse et vous le savourez de mes endroits doux
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